I love the part where Jin lifted Lili it was really romantic ... I really hope you'll continue writing wonderful stories ...

God Bless ...

Can't comment too much on the characters, but I think you got the essence of a friendly spar down well.

love your story! i want to know whats gonna happen next.. please make a continuation.. pleeeaaseee :

omg! thank u sooooooo much 4 this story i loooove it! but plz 4giv me if i say this but when did i make a public request bout this? anywayyz thankzz a lot!

it's good,I love the ending:)

There aren't so many Jin/Li fics out there and i'm just so happy that you made this! Thanks a lot. :D

OMG! Love- to the - it! Could you please, If you wouldnt mind, and/or have time someday, Make some sort of sequel? I would really love to see a sequel if there is gonna be one!But you dont have to. Its just a suggestion. this storys going on my fav. list, ;)

Good luck in future stories,

-SP