yes, please more!

that was so so nice of Sherlock but it was still not AU and I nearly cried when John told his Story. That was a really awesome Story!

I love this story. It's well paced and the characters are spot on. I like that Sherlock was sort of awkward and unsure of what to do at first. Lovely, lovely story. Brilliant! :)

Great story! I really enjoyed it.

I'd like to have seen more of this; it was executed really well but I would've still liked more - guess I'm just being greedy )

yay to multi-chapter stuff. constructive criticism... ? It was written extremely well and I enjoyed it :)

Definitely more multi-chaptered stuff!

This was great to read! :) Good job!

It was really, rather good. :) the one thing all we writers have problems with, is wanting to convey pain after an injury, obviously yes, it was a near death experience john went through, and this next part i myself wouldnt have known had my dad not been talking about it tje other day, but when the humvee in front blew up, and john jumped out, he would have already been running on adrenilin. Apparently, when your shot or injured during the adrenilin rush, you cant feel it. Which is why people are always patting all over their body. Just for future refrence. It is really good though. :)

It was really, rather good. :) the one thing all we writers have problems with, is wanting to convey pain after an injury, obviously yes, it was a near death experience john went through, and this next part i myself wouldnt have known had my dad not been talking about it tje other day, but when the humvee in front blew up, and john jumped out, he would have already been running on adrenilin. Apparently, when your shot or injured during the adrenilin rush, you cant feel it. Which is why people are always patting all over their body. Just for future refrence. It is really good though. :)

This is great! Can't wait to read part two!

awwww this is really good! i think this good make great canon as well, cuz john does have nightmares, and youd think sherlock would know about them. maybe next season?

please keep writting :)

I think it was lovely but I don't think sherlock woukld have asked John if he wanted water he probably could have deduced it. Otherwise awesome :)

Loved it! Seemed pretty in character, what with Sherlock not knowing exactly how to comfort until he stops actually thinking about it so hard.

Only issue is it's spelled 'humvee'. (I'm a bit of a military nut, so I pick up on these things.)

This is a really interesting view of Watson's injury. I've never heard any stories like this one before. Good job.