Wow I really don't have any words this was great u made me cry and I don't a lot in stories but wow your awazming :,3

i really love it

The best Rainbowdash and Applejack story ever I Cried inside for most of the story I hope you do more with Rainbowdash Applejack and Reddawn but in a happier story

This is indeed one of the best stories I have ever read. Rainbow Dash and Applejack seem like the perfect couply but there have been many stories and art work about Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy. But I must say that this was heartwarming and I love it.

This is one of the best MLP:FiM stories I've ever read. You managed to keep AJ and RD completely in character despite the dramatic setting. The feel of the story itself also felt completely true to life.

Thanks for the awesome fic. I'm definitely adding you to my favorite authors.

This is actually something I often worry about when I read AppleDash fics. Would Dash go on to the Wonderbolts or settle down with Applejack?

This is a really well written story. I really enjoyed it, and you definitely captured the characters' essences well. It's something that I often find lacking, reading stories where the plot is sound but the characters aren't right.

And I really liked the ending too. It could have gone either way, but I'm a sucker for happy endings, and I'll agonise over thigns that end in tragedy.

Thanks for the great story! Looking forward to more works from you.

This is a great fic. It captures the essencs of the characters personalities and really shows the work of a crew of writers and editors. My only problems is basically pointing out where punctuation is missing and that's it.

All in all, I would love to see more like this and more stories by the writers/editors.

Mr. Masato/Arby Works.

I liked this story. I think you captured the natures of Rainbow Dash and Applejack rather well, even though I think Reddawn's a bit of a weird name. I think your style is sound and that your choices of diction keep the flow well.

I confess I must be losing my edge as a critic since I could not find something to tell you to improve upon, but I urge you to continue writing and improving in all things.

Nice story, and there is a nice amount of emotion in the dialogue. But it is also a prime example of one of the pet peeves of mine about AppleDash stories. In almost all stories it seems that it's Dash who has to give up her job/house/dreams etc. Which to me really doesn't seem like a healthy relationship.

Which also makes RD in this story somewhat unbelievable, as I was constantly waiting for her to propose that her family comes with her to some of the tours etc.

A beautiful story. The conversation going back and forth made it seem like a real divorce discussion. The ending was a toss up and I'm glad for the direction it went.