Reviews for Why We Left
pokemaster101 chapter 9 . 12/22/2019
I do love Green and Silver getting along.

And the fact that you involved his gym trainers and them acting like a family.

Ideas?
-Silver checking out Green’s gym looking for clues about his dad. After he realizes that Giovanni was the previous leader
-Blue finding out about Red since they live in the same town/or her remembering Red and Green from childhood
-Red visiting his mama
-confrontation with prof oak?
-telling Daisy he’s back/telling her they’re a couple
-people finding out about Red (although this one can be in the future)
-Green seeing Pikachu
-Pikachu and Eevee playtime
-that dinner Green and the gym trainers were supposed to have (possible tell them about Red)
-more originalshipping fluff talking about their relationship/why Red really left why Green is shaking (insecure about Red staying)
-bonding or sleep over with Red, Green, Blue, Gold, Silver

Loving this story so far.
pokemaster101 chapter 8 . 12/22/2019
Ha Ash Ketchum lol
creativesm75 chapter 9 . 5/19/2018
funny. cool
Celaj15 chapter 9 . 12/29/2015
I like how you characterize Green and Red. The side Preciousmetal ship is a plus! :D
Celaj15 chapter 8 . 12/29/2015
"ASH" Lol. Good going Red. XD
PokeFireRED chapter 5 . 12/20/2015
waitwait whos the Uke and whos the Seme?
Aki chapter 9 . 10/14/2015
Omg I love this. Keep up the good work!
fubja chapter 9 . 10/3/2015
*OMG* Love this story!
Its adorable and hilarious at the same time :)
I cant wait to read the next chapter! :D
Kim chapter 6 . 7/28/2015
So good very romantic.
Kim chapter 5 . 7/28/2015
Yaaay. They kissed!
K chapter 3 . 7/28/2015
I wish I know who Bell is.
Kim chapter 2 . 7/28/2015
Great recap! It couldn't have been said better than Green's voice written by you.
Kim chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
This is a very beautiful beginning, detailing all the important parts of their journeys. I can't wait to read on.
Kagehina Crow baby chapter 9 . 6/18/2015
Please, oh god please, you must write more! I just really love this story and read it all in like the last hour and I so freaking want more! Green and Silver are too fucking cute, and omg PreciousMetalShipping is LIFE! Red too, omggg he's so damn precious! And you have Gold's personality down to a pinpoint perfection, he's the perfect and correct dorky buttmunch he's supposed to be!3! But really in all seriousness, thank you for writing this, like, it's one of the best of the OriginalShipping stories, in my opinion. I love you for that, omg don't be creeped out but like this story is perfection in all its adorable, fluffy moments that are perfectly carved out from the Pokemon world-that is totally and completly lacking in any romance whatsoever anyway- using you're own awesome creating TOOLS; your wonderful mind and laptop! or whatever you use if not a laptop. You get my point! Sorry I don't have any amazing ideas for you but this is getting kinda long so i'm gonna cut it short; just keep doing what you're doing cause it's awesome kay? 3
-Crow That Wants To Be A Kitten
HKTK chapter 9 . 5/2/2015
YEAH you updated it 0w0
i been waiting thanks for updated
i love your fic for all the love and progress you did for red and green TwT
sorry my bad english T_T
happy birthday and i hope that you recovered
waaaa x3 really thanks you
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