Omg this fanfic had me dying the fact that his clones were smarter than him was hilarious thank you for blessing my brain

Yeah, it’s always kinda cringe inducing looking at one’s older works, I feel you there.

I don’t get when people don’t have problem when it’s naruto that a kid and hinata r sum body an adult but when ya switch it around your scum Nani

Most interesting.

Thos is straight Hentai

perv

Really dude pedo fanfic this is BS what is wrong with you people I understand fanfic with Hinata or Sakura but with little girls Naruto would never do that and if your making this pedo shit your a pedo yourself go damn

This feels too real, am in actual pain.

Great fic are you going to add this or your there stories to AO3?
and fuck the fat little fuck in mother basement jacking off to this and then feeling bad about it and bitch at you for it

Liked the first two parts but felt turned off as the girls blackmailed the MC and talked like hes lower than them. Its one thing if it was an original character but as fan fic, i think it was supposed to be still within character. Naruto would not have been depressed by that and probably just laughed it of in an innocent but also a bit naughty way. Remember he was raised by Ero-Sennin so more or less he has a naughty playful side and considering he only did what was still within the guidlines for kunoichi, im not certain it would make him this under those girls. Sakura's threats and insults at naruto work because she was literally strong AF but these girls cant knock him out so i dont think so.

I would also like to point out that although japanese people also say curse words, most dont have the habit of saying something with the word fuck in in. Example "he fucking did this or we've fucking got a golden opportunity". I suppose the writing style seems to be too westernized that the characters also feel slightly off. Then again that might also just be me since im used to japanese culture and also imagining the dialogue in japanese with english subtitles lol

Love it

what a fun little tale haha. Good luck mate

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Great job

This is done for shits and giggles... more shits than giggles tho.

Meh, I'll just keep to your more "realistic" stories, this isn't my cup o' tea