wow... that was the most disgusting chapter i have ever read it was looking at a 10 year old trying to make a interesting chapter ...

Oh jeez this is so rushed

Hey, can’t you just fucking kill Sasuke and the fuckign little goat AKA The Uchiha Dicksucker?

IS TEMARI A MALE OR A FUCKING FEMALE?!

It was a good fic,until the fourth wall authors that break the fourth wall,im out.

Wow. The story just got stupid with naruto getting the fox chakra seal.
It could of been a little different, should of summon kurama.
Naruto even fought hiruzen won with kotoamitsukami.
Should made orochimaru naruto's bitch.
Somehow this fight made naruto stupier than 2 years ago when he fought hiruzen.
So the deal is, it was great but i wont be reading chapter 9 due to gogyo fuin.
It would of been a funny moment if naruto did a reverse gogyo fuin on pedo-maru instead.
Sorry. Not sorry.

Sounds like a guy that watch too many roleplay of porn.

did I miss something or did Naruto fuck Tsunami while his team where almost getting them selves killed and then show up just to kill gatou and his men while showing off by using one attack

Dude this fanfic sucks there’s no general story line it’s just all random like there’s characters from other anime popping in left right and center...what a waste of 4 hours damn

Dude this fanfic sucks there’s no general story line it’s just all random like there’s characters from other anime popping in left right and center...what a waste of 4 hours

slug tsunade senju
raven Mikoto uchiha
sloth yoshino nara
devil kyuubi
bird hitomi hyuuga

Your grammar is horrible, the story line is one of the worst I’ve ever seen and you never seem to focus on a specific time. Disgusting story. Please kill yourself.

So much sex

so bad but so good

This was an excellent chapter and I really enjoyed the story. It’s very well done