Love this so much

Oh it was great! The title ticked me off at first, but I guessed I was too quick to judge. Go Flight!

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Wow I absolutely loved it. And the introduction of Biggs and Wedge lol classic I missed those 2 glad to c an appearance of the old sidekicks

Rereading this, I enjoyed it as much as I did before, although I have to say that the first part of the story is probably better than the second half. At least personally speaking, I found it a bit unfair with regards to Fang. Don't think it's fair to say that Fang's rather legitimate concerns with Vanille going to a very dangerous place without her magic in company of people Fang knows are not particularly competent, all information which was dumped on her at a moments notice is equally as patronizing as Lighting's inability to give her younger yet grown up sister the room to explore her romantic relationship with her committed and trustworthy boyfriend. That's hardly equivalent at all. Still, overall really enjoyable story, thank you for sharing this.

Great story. Lightning and Fang were just adorable, while at the same time maintaining their badassery. Definitely one of my favourite fanfics.

Applause. This was excellent. I should take a page from you and learn to actually end my stories instead of letting them go on forever.
I loved this. It was nice to see a bit of trials and tribulations in their relationship, but the pair of them never truly running from it. Lightning was just a bit nervous, understandably and Fang was ever persistent, also understandably.
Great work. Will be looking for your other works soon.
Keep writing. You're a gift to us all.

Good action, cute sharing moment at the end, there. I'm gonna be sad to see this story ended, I'm not afraid to say. It was a wonderfully fun read.
Hats off to you, sir.
On to the next...

I know how you feel about posting chapters you're not happy with. I have quite a few of those in some of the stories I write. They sound good when you read them, but as you do so, you start finding niggly little things that you don't really dig on. Happens to me more than I care to admit.
I suppose it's better than writing a huge series of chapters that you really think are your magnum opus for a series and have to continue it because you promised your readers you would finish out the story.
But I loved this chapter. I think it was well done. I know I say that a lot, but I feel it worth saying again. Seeing both Lightning and Fang say 'I love you' was really nice. And no, I am not one of those people that thinks 'love has to have a chance to grow'. I played a character in my wife's fantasy RPG world that fell in love with another woman in all of about two weeks from meeting her (she was actually captivated with her immediately).
Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading any kind of FF13 fic you wanna write. As long as it has Fang in it (please don't ship her with Snow. That would just be weird).
On to the next...

Kind of at a crossroads here. On the one hand, I like the sisterly love that Vanille and Fang share with each other, but at the same time, Vanille is right. Fang does sacrifice a lot for her. Now it's Fang's turn to be happy. Vanille saw this coming and yet she does seem kind of butt-hurt by it.
Not sure how to feel about that. Only time will tell.
Great work as always. Keep it up.
Ramblin' on...

I like it. I like it a lot. Not much to say. Not sure how the secret Lightning is keeping from Fang is going to play out, but it was a great chapter all around.
On to the next...

I swear to god, if you make the Guardian Corps make Fang and Vanille move, I will hunt you down and fill your bathtub with old fertilizer!
I loved this chapter. It was well written and made me smile.
Keep it coming...
*Sigh*I say that as if the story isn't complete.
Well, on to the next...

I really like this. But I've gotta ask, what's your issue with Snow (it just seems like there's some hatred there). Like I said in the last review, I can see why Lightning doesn't care for him, but I never really got the feeling from the game that she outright HATED him. And by the end of the game, she seemed to be a bit more okay with him.
Just curious. Anyway, great chapter. Very fun, very romantic. Keep up the good work.
Up and away...

Nicely done. I can see why you'd enjoy writing their parts, personally. Though to be honest, why both Maqui and Yuj aren't checking Lebreau out, I'll never know. She was a stone cold hottie in the game. I can't help but notice in the last few chapters a bit of Snow bashing. Granted, I really wouldn't be happy with the guy who was railing my little sister on the regular either, but in the game, he wasn't that bad.
Anyway, I do like the playfulness of Lightning and Fang. It's fun to see.
Onward and upward. Chapter 7 awaits...

I don't really see Serah caring who Lightning ends up with as long as she's happy. I know she has her preferences, but just seeing a genuine loving smile on her sister's face SHOULD be enough. And Fang is right, Lightning should stop caring what other people think. I mean, truthfully, she didn't seem to give much of a crap what other people thought of her in the game.
But again, a very well written chapter and thoroughly enjoyable for the most part.
Chapter 5, here I come...