Reviews for A party at Sector Seven and too much sake! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Rachel is so cute! and now is dunked... i think Makoto found her dress subject |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, the hilarity! Think we can see some Ragna/Litchi action later? Also... Drunk Rachel. Oh god why. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I'm glad you somewhat finally got to this now though if only you'd be faster in the updates. Just a thought is all... I'm finding this Rachel hilarious. :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's sure the room is a mess. Wonder what happened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey wouldnt it be great that fan favorites such as Jin Kisiragi and Hazama would make appearance in ur fic. Also presence of Noel and Tsubaki and Master Jubei and Vallkehyn would give us fans lot of laughing moments. P.S plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update ur awesome fan-fic. Im sure u deserve every reviews for ur chapters. Coz ur fic is dat much awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It great start to alreday promising fic. Featuring our favourite Miss Kokkonoe, Litichi, Makoto, Taokaka,Iron Tager, Rags and Rachel. I hoping for dat ull decide to update ur amzing fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I forsee shenanagins of an epic nature. Rachel is drunk. I fear for us all. I'm just waiting for Hazama to show up and start taking pictures. You know that's what he'd do. I'd really like to see this continued! Good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapters aren't very long so you should be all over this you know. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super neato. Super cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. I am not English so I can't write well but I like your FF and you write with correct suspense, I hope you'll write soon next chapeter because I'm starting to undestand what's up with tager! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can only imagine what Kokonoe's going to do next ... Anyway, despite the length, I liked the chapter a lot. It earned quite a few laughs so the humour's all good. I can't point out any mistakes anywhere and everyone appears to be in character (at least until there's more alcohol being passed around) so kudos to you for that too. I've got nothing else to say so I'll wrap this up. Looking forward to the next chapter :) |