Reviews for Vortex of Beats |
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![]() ![]() I really like your story so far and hope you can continue! But... Um... Why did you have to leave it there? It's such a cliffhanger! It makes me want to read more! I know its been two years since you last updated and you may have lost the inspiration to write this story, but please don't just leave it there! I cant wait to see what happens to edward next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can't quit when its getting good! NOOOOO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oohhh... i think i know what you're on too, so dark goes to ed? but how does that work for the automail? is dark gonna gave to do it with ed's automail? isn't that a little bit short for such a big guy as dark? oooohhh small dark XD that would be adorable ps dark and ed have the same voice actor XD please keep updating and pls read my dnagel fma as well :3 nya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so good ! Please keep writing it! Also if you're stuck , then I have an idea for you to use on the next chapter . Please keep going , this is one of the best FMA/D.N. Angel crossovers out there! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Random guess: Dark got transferred to Ed. Am I right? Or is there something else... Anyway, I'm really liking this so far. Thanks for sharing it with me! |
![]() ![]() NOOOO CONTINUE |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great please continue! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get the feeling Dark was redirected into Ed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Dark is going to be in Ed's head now? Isn't that like a paradox or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayayayayayay! Updates! I'm so glad! This is such a good story! What's happening is Ed gonna be all right? Could it have something to do with dark? Are the homonculi involved? Lets find out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story, please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! I really wanna know why happens next! I really hope dark and daiske are gonna be ok :( ...…anyway great story plz continue! |
![]() ![]() Ooooh! You have to keep updating! I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please continue You can't leave it there |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! 'Toshi is here too! No! Dark! Poor Dark. Bet the humunculus or Krad are somehow doing it. I feel really bad for Daisuke. Please, please update! |