Oh my god the ending killed me XD Fantastic job doing domestic USUK!

Oh god...
The BAM BAM BAM parts just crazcked me up xD
Go BAM BAM BAM each other!

I would love for you to do a second chapter with a wedding now that gay marriage is legal. That would be so cute, with Grace as the flower girl!

"What if the monsters had gotten to papa? If she left the safety of her blankets, she'd never save papa."

No! Little Grace, don't do it! Don't make the same mistake I made as a child! It will scar you for life. XD This was amazing and wonderful and filled me with all of the feels. 10/10!

szcsjknampwajcfpwenfwme I died lol

*Evil laughs at the ending scene
LOL, I LOVED this! xD
So cute :3

This is a FANTASTIC story! I love it so much! This has got to be the best "caught-in-the-act-'cause-the-little-kid-is-there" kind of story. SO cute! (But, of course, fan of yours, gotta love every story you write... ;D) Fantastic! I love Grace, and their whole family element. They're perfect fathers! Well, with stuff they have to deal with, but eh, they're almost perfect. Great story, and totally believable. I am always stunned with how closely you are able to pin your characters to the real things. The fandom is a totally different universe from the actual Hetalia comic and anime, and that's what makes some characters so hard to pin down. But you have Alfred/America and Arthur/England down amazingly. I will never be disappointed with the stories you post! (And, of course, the art, as well!) It's all too beautiful for words!

I read this and then I went BAM BAM BAM

I love you, I do. That ending just made my day XD Very sweet story. I just wanna hug Grace so tight! Too cute! :D

Too cute!

Though the sudden mention of Alfred's job and its underlying risk gave me chills. Just the thought of Arthur having to go through that...makes me want to cry.

And LOL, it's adorable how Grace thought those noises were monsters. Haha!

I loved this story, very realistic portrayal of moving into a life with children while still trying to maintain the 'romance'.

I can't help but imagine the reason that Alfred may have been reluctant to initially get into the spirt of adopting was he wasn't thrilled by the thought of sharing Arthur's attention :P

Your review on 'Pointblank' reminded me that I've had this up for like 24 hours and still needed to read it and HNNG, these two shouldn't be allowed to be so cute!

(I loved all of 'Hospital Flowers', btw, that was just back in the days when I was too shy to review orz)

But ahhh, this was so precious! Their family life left me with the dorkiest smile ever on my face, mainly because paternal!Alfred is a humongous soft spot of mine...he would just be the most sickly protective and goofy dad ever, and he's perfect here. :3

Also, somehow their having a child in the house made the sexytiems all infinitely more attractive, ahahaha (and hilarious - oh man, the end was priceless~).

Anyways, such an adorable fic. :)

Ohhh I think I'm dying from cuteness

This was just such a sweet continuation! I love how both of them behave as parents, LOL the sex part was the best! XD

Keep it up with the amazing stories (:

pffft reading this made me very happy :D thankyou for writing this!

Awww this is too adorable and way to funny. I love this. XD