I knew I shouldn't have read this. It is really good. And I know you probably won't be seeing this but if you do you did awesome. I knew this wouldn't be touched again but I read it anyway. I am kicking myself over it.

Aww

this lemon was amazing truely!

i love this fic since the beginning, i really enjoyed reading it from one chapter to another chapter, i remember when you finally updated in 2015, i squeal and even took a break at work just to read it at office's pantry _, english is not my first language, pardon me if some of my words that i typed were wrong or grammatical error, i want to appreciate your works especially this fight to survive fic, i hope u dont lose your muse and continue this fic, i will always patiently waiting for the update

Please, for the love of god, I need to know how this story ends! I found this fic a few days ago and couldn't stop reading it! The character development and pacing are so good! PLEASE tell me you will update this some day! Even though I see it's been about two years since your last update :') No pressure but,,,, I HAVE AN EMOTIONAL NEED FOR THIS

OMG please update! This was so amazing! Ive been reading all night . now its 3AM! I just couldn't stop reading! great job but I need to know if they leave namek! PLEASE update!

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This is THE Namek fic. I'm dying to know what happens with Frieza! Really hope you update.

Please, please, please! Do not leave abandoned this fic! Continue updating this beautiful and interesting history. I have unveiled reading me each of the chapters and truly want to know the final outcome. Please, I ask you again not to abandon this great story of my favorite couple.
Thank you.

Loooooooooove it plz finish it! Don't abandon it you got talent ! Love the story

I think it's funny she daydreams about sunbathing on Earth during peaceful time conveniently forgetting that every few years she was in dire peril along with the rest of the Earth. But there were some lulls to all the danger I guess. But you can't gloss over the almost constant world crisis.

Shouldn't Vegeta be off hunting more often? Or some sort of Survival thing? They have to be getting short on food a month in. With his Saiyan appetite anyway. I know it's ambiguous how much food they have but the story is about survival and all. I know he trains that's stereotypical Vegeta. But I'm reasonably sure he'd be off hunting fresh meat than relying on noodles to eat.

So what does being a human male have to do with helping someone? I think that could have been worded better. Maybe something more closer to a male doing a favor for a pretty girl? I think that's what you were going for but it's not how it sounded.

Also him having to crouch to carry her makes little sense. Not that it wasn't interesting I'm not being picky about that. I'm just fairly certain Vegeta could lift her with one arm and still keep his is super strong remember. He could probably lift her with his pinky with ease. So it was an interesting if slightly unnecessary thing for them to do.

His reactions in this chapter make more sense and are more realistic. While it was silly for him get an erection at the mere sight of her, touching her is another matter. Being that close and doing things like that would drive him a little wild.

I am glad you dialed up the comedy in this chapter. You need a mix of light and dark chapters to make your story and effective roller coaster ride.

So I think it's a bit early to start with second chances and saying he's changing. Mostly because he's really not at this point. Showing another side to someone is not the same as changing. It's more like revealing more layers. Now I'm sure it will be more accurate later on when he does little things without noticing or complaints it will be far more accurate. But for now it's said it's rushed to say he's changing.

So her home was on Earth. I'm glad we finally got more backstory on what exactly happened. As you could tell it was bothering me. Only because I wanted to be sure about where the characters were and how they got there. That's all. I'm not really that picky once those questions are answered. And since it's an AU a little background is needed I think anyway.

Plus we found out it was Goku's ship. That would make more sense on why she had no idea where it was. I still wonder on what exactly happened to her ship. Or did it get destroyed like in the canon universe?

I'm actually a little surprised he didn't rip off a piece of dinosaur to eat later. Or perhaps eat it's heart in victory. Well maybe that last one is a little too far but the first seems more than reasonable they can't subsist on capsules forever, she doesn't have an infinite supply.

You keep referring to ending up in a gutter. It's an idiom and I get it, but Namek isn't an industrial world. They have no gutters. Wouldn't it be more accurate to say end up in a ditch? Just a suggestion.

I fell Vegeta should have been more torn about saving her. Sure he had one weird dream with her. But ignoring that he has probably survived worse in his lifetime without her help. And yes she has some cool toys but nothing that would prove useful to him in escaping just yet. So I would think he would more conflicted on whether he should waste the energy saving her or not. Also he probably would not refer them as a duo just yet. They hardly had any sort of team activities outside of meals to classify them as a duo. I think his final argument in her favor would be her potential. Something closer to "She might prove useful to me yet if given the chance." or something like that rather than just admitting she was a vital part of some non existent team.

So wait i'm confused. If Bulma had a spaceship, why wasn't her plan to make her way to the spaceship with Frieza gone? I don't know if it has a locator or something on it for her to follow, but even in the world we live in now GPS or some space equivalent would not be too far fetched to install on a ship. If it's not in working order that would make sense, they would have to scrounge for materials to fix it from the demolished Namek villages. But I feel like the spaceship should have at least made it's way as a possibility in Bulma's thoughts earlier. At least something like ditching Vegeta to go to the ship on her own. Since she was so uncomfortable with him before.

Also just because Vegeta couldn't read human writing doesn't mean he couldn't figure it out. I am sure he had to pilot many different types of ships during his career in the PTO and had to learn many different languages and writing. Surely those skills would have helped him now. Still it's a good case for retrieving Bulma. It's far easier to get someone who can read it than to learn a new language though it certainly would do him good to learn it.

Just wanted to point out that I'm unsure he'd be training all the time. I get why a lot of fanfics have him do it. Since during the three years it's assumed that's all he does. But that was only to become a Super Saiyan and catch Goku. Without that same need he would not train as much. Not say he wouldn't train, I'm sure it's a part of his daily routine and lifestyle as a warrior. But he is in survival mode now. His first tasks would be gathering essential materials to survive followed by doing what he can to escape.

Oh and now that she mentioned it, Where is the home Bulma is referring to? Just thought i'd ask. Perhaps she'll talk about more in the next chapter. I do write these reviews as I read the chapter. So she had no idea the space ship was there. So what happened to her original space ship if it's not this one? Well I guess that will be answered next chapter.

So where did she and Goku go Dragonball hunting if Earth doesn't exist? Not that it's a huge deal I'm just curious since it was mentioned.

You know I spent part of the chapter wondering how dinosaur would taste. I wonder if it's any good or not. We don't eat many reptiles in my culture. Maybe a few fringe elements eat frog and snake but that's about it. Maybe they taste more like birds since Dinosaurs are supposed to be closely related to birds. So maybe they taste like a a huge chicken.

Kinda weird they shared some sort of dream in his mind. So this is supposed to cause him to do what for Bulma I wonder? It feels a little rushed with some of the things he thought/felt. He's only known her a few days I'd say it's kinda rushed to go from "I don't care about you" to "please don't leave me". Building a relationship takes time. They have to do little things together to get past his shell. Like share meals, build fires, look for water, whatever really. The plot points on why they do little things don't matter so much as them spending time together. It just doesn't seem realistic to care about her at all really in the dream. Sure she's she pretty, but pretty wouldn't immediately make him more or less inclined to help her. He realistically has killed and possibly raped many beautiful beings in his time. Bulma would have to spend more time than she has the last few chapters to matter as much as he says to be any different than them.