Decent, but very Very OOC. You should put up OOC warnings for readers.

It’s perfect so far, FallinInDreams! Ignore the flamers. You’ve done beautifully!

So good!

This is really well written but I didn't enjoy it much since it felt like the relationship between Draco and Hermione moved way too fast. I felt like you should have spent more time in France where they fell in love. Also I felt like Draco and Hermione should have adopted Scorpius in the end. Draco was the only father that Scorpius had known and it felt like Draco put him aside once he found out that Scorpius wasn't his real son.

I loved it... I believe they were happy & had a dozen kids so Draco got to hold his babies and watch them grow! and Lucius came around in the end!

Very well done! I loved the writing and the storyline!

This was a fantastic read well done

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. You are a talented storyteller. I so appreciated that Draco remained the self interested and sarcastic character that we all know and love. This story was only four chapters but contained all the plot twists necessary to keep the reader interested. Thanks for sharing your creativity with the fanfiction community. I am in awe of your ability with the written word.

This was very fun. I really enjoyed it. I loved that she got pregnant in the end! Thank you!

OH MY GOD. I LOVE THIS HOLY SHT. GREAT FANFICTION. I LOVE THO ID LOVE TO SEE MORE OF HERMIONE'S PREGNANCY WITH THEIR SECOND CHILD. I HOPE IT'S A BOY

OMG what an amazing ride! I had to hide a few times and worried how things were going to turn out but overall this was well written and well done. Of course if I'd read the reviews before reading the story I might have missed out on such a great story-cowards flame "shame on you" like that.
anyhoo. I think you've done an amazing job and I wish you had some other dramione multi stories. *here's hoping for more*
Have a great day!

I'd like to start by saying that you write quite well. That being said, if you ever check the comments here again considering I am years late, the characters are so out of character it hurts. For starters as already stated by some others Hermione would never have raised her child and allowed her to become so vain and arrogant not to mention snobby (let the servants do menial task esque). I had to stop reading during the first chapter. There is no way that Harry would disrespect Hermione by telling HER daughter who her father was against her wishes. Hermione would never associate herself with a parent that would undermine her as a parent so blatantly. Especially considering the child was not even ten yet. She is six. Harry went behind her back and undermined her parenting while being a father himself and decided to tell her six year old child who her father was. With Ginny making comments like that. No mother in her right mind would allow that to happen much less Hermione. Shame on you. On seeing Draco and bring betrayed like that she should have left then and there.

Amazing story. You built the anticipation well and led into the 6yrs later fluently. I love the fact that this wasn't just another 'Draco didn't know' story and it's epic without going overboard. You've done an amazing job of bringing these characters to life and I love that their daughter wasn't just some clone of either of her parents-it's not realistic that it always happens. I would know lol.

Overall an amazing effort and I'm going to go read all your other dramione now too. Ignore that flamer. You write like you want to write. From where I'm standing, you've done an amazing job. Well done.

While this was a well written story with a decent plot and conclusion, there were certain things that I thought we uncharacteristic. The shallowness of some moments really got to me. For eg, Emilie being a snobby person who talked about letting the 'servants' do the menial tasks. I feel like Hermione as a parent would have ensured that her child respected all kinds of jobs and ensured dignity of labour. Another thing I didn't appreciate was Hermione's 'dream' of marriage when she was a little girl. Let's be serious, her parents wouldn't have brought her up with those ideas and considering how she'd spent most of her childhood among books, she couldnt have given a damn about marriage as a kid. And the story focuses too much on Hermione ensuring Draco could sire a male child. As if he was 'missing' something by not having a son. And lo behold he can have children again because god forbid he can't have a male heir. Ugh. That was nauseating. I would have personally preferred him fighting archaic and sexist laws to ensure his daughter could be more than just a thing to spoil and cuddle. But we can't have it all can we?

the 'Dramione 1 night stand pregnancy which Draco finds out about years later' is a trope, but I really like how this one was done. No OOC stuff. Romantic.