Please continue the story, it's really good. It really sets the mood.

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! Write the next chapters and update as soon as possible. Pleeeeeeeeease I need to know what happened to Splendid and if Flaky will be able to learn what's going on from Lumpy ( she just need to ask him )

Omg! Is that Splendid! I wanna Know! Please update

"Wow, you're OLD." XD That was awesome. And YAY, SPLENDID"S BACK! If not Lumpy...

strange... i thought about the same sorta concept for thier Limbo-ability of coming back to life.

I thought about necklaces, made from Shreds of thouse accursed Totems.

Nice job.

But what happens if you take it?

Oeh~ nice story. Good first chapter. You got me captured in it now. I want more. *demanding posure* I like how the story flows. Not to much details but still enough to give you a proper image of everything that happens around Flaky.

I can't wait for a new chapter. I will watch this story closely

keep up the good work 3

I love it. Literally love it! You should definitely continue this, I REALLY want to read more! :3

As for the criticism, I'm not sure what to say! ' hehe!

This story is awsome so mysterious I like it what happens next's I want to know is good keep it up ok XD