update? it sounds really interesting

/cries because this is AWESOME and you're a great writer and OTP FEELS YES
Also, is this fic one that will remain unfinished, or do you plan on completing it?

Aw...I'm glad that, even though it's very tentative, they're friends again. I also love the fact that Percy's perceptiveness allows himself to determine the different types of ways people are, even to the point of their thinking process. It's quite funny to say, but Percy could be considered a genius of academics. XD I look forward to your next chapter.

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Aw...a very cute and warming start to what I'm positive will be an awesome story. Heh, Oliver's obsessive, alright. XD

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This is great!

Update!

Awww, this really is an adorable story! I love how Quidditch is Oliver's language and I love the dynamic that the two of them have! I can't wait until their friends You have such a lovely style, everything flows so well and it sounds casual and sophisticated all at once and eep, the two of them are so adorable! I love their characterization as well and how you've already shown that even though they have such differing opinions and even though they've clearly already had problems, there's still something there. As in, I really enjoy how you've managed to capture a certain... complexity? XDD As you can see, I don't have your way with words! But what I basically mean is that I like how you can make them so different yet still showing how they have a foundation for friendship ;D They're super adorable and please don't ever stop writing! Even outside of this story. I love it!

I really like this story, and I noticed that it has been two months since you updated. I'm not trying to be pushy, or anything, but I would love to know what happens next.

Haha, I loved this! Please update soon! :)

THEY'RE SO CUTE.

I love it. I am really just falling in love with these two.

Aww... I don't know who I feel worse for. Percy was just being Percy, but Oliver Wood without a broomstick is sad. :(

Awesomely done, though. Cx

Progress for the sake of progress... says the Umbridge in my head.

"You oughtn't throw them, you know. The spines are rather fragile." This sentence just speaks to me. It says that wow, here is Percy, trying to awkwardly make things better but obviously not knowing the right thing to say. Yet his attempt is just so innocent and all, and Oliver's reaction to it says it clearly wasn't working. Yet I still adored it anyhow.

I was going to comment on the fact that they are really polar opposites, and that they really don't understand the other's view points, yet how that works much to their advantage. I was going to say that they have such strong opinions on things and that they really are made to be, since Percy can teach Oliver to be tame, yet Oliver can teach Percy how to let his hair loose. I was going to, but then I realized that it's called Contrastingly Similar. And then I realized that that's exactly what I was trying to describe in my laymens manner.

Ah, McGonagall. Always pushing them in the right direction- whether inadvertently or not. And I am still very impressed with how well you write Mcgonagall. You may be Lily, but you've definitely got a little Minerva in you too.

Oliver's refusal of 'two hours a week' was completely realistic (even though it's hardly a sacrifice for good grades!). He'd much rather be watching the Quiddtich team, or playing in mud, or climbing trees. He can't stand to sit still for so long, and that is just so clear with your characterization.

And the book title! Got to me. That was very good improvisation. But the idea of explaining Transfiguration to him in Quidditch terms is hard to pass up. It was a brilliant idea really. I like tutor!Percy.

This chapter was lovely, mostly the end. Oh the tangled webs we weave... says the spider in my head.

Aww yay! They're friends again! I can't wait until next month to read more!

Lol I love the idea that Percy had to "translate" transfiguration into english. xD