This is excellent. The twins are pranksters extraordinaire.

This was amazing! This whole thing is a masterpiece! The only problem with iit is there isn't anymore of it. Which is a shame seeing as this story is probably the most believable Harry/Tonks fic that is set in book 5... like ever! It needs more! Or you know... you could make another Harry/Tonks fic. Just saying

I like Harry/Tonks. Despite their age difference, I think they are a good match. Tonks possesses a sense of fun and is able to pull Harry out of the funk into which he sometimes descends. I definitely prefer this pairing to Harry/Ginny.

Laughed my ass off. Kinda want to see how the bet would turn out.

i should probably point outthat that kind mental manipulation is evil, but it does make for an amusing read

And this shows that you don't have to be crass to be hot. Very well written, very... exciting. Well done!

0.0 lol I started to wonder why the twins were acting up at breakfast but wow.

Well done

My god that was hot...and funny

I like it

Interesting if a bit confusing as to wat harry was actually doing in the first part. Breakfast was hilarious though, so much innuendo there. Would have maybe been funnier if the twins didn't realize the dual meanings of what they were saying.

Great one shot, but what I would really like would be if you posted a new chapter of Poker Knight at or even post that story here.

Aww no! Please continue! *blushing* not just because it was smutty and well written from that standpoint but I just like Tonks and Harry. Good plot line as well and if course well written and steamy.

oh God I love you so much I haven't laughed that hard in a long time.

coool ,its was funny ,passion ,coool and awesome

Absolutely delightful. I loved the juxtaposition of the playful plot and the baroque language used in the dream sequences. The breakfast scene was particularly inspired. Please do write more of this pairing, you have a fresh perspective on it that's sorely needed. Well done.