Really good but please hurry and edit this quickly, I can't wait what you have in store for all your readers!

When are you going to edit this

Of course I remember Kanto and Johto travels that's why I'm here XD. It's been so long though I kind of forget exactly what's happened... Rowan and Doug hopefully will thaw a little after this so they aren't constantly arguing It was a good chapter it's good to see this story get updated XD

You're making me blush. I'm just glad you're back with another chapter! It's been a while since I've reviewed, so I'd like to comment on the story in general first before discussing this chapter. I really like how the story is progressing, and how things are really starting to heat up. I really like how you solved the problem of Rowan and Doug already having veteran teams with the PC issue, and I'm excited to see their Hoenn teams grow! I also am enjoying the ways the two have changed in the years between Johto & Kanto and now - for better and for worse. I think both of them have some unresolved issues: Doug's become even angrier, and Rowan, though I like how much more mature she is, does seem to have a stick up her ass (Adventuring in high heels? You're smarter than that!). I 'm interested to see how this might change or how they can rekindle the flames, or at least learn to cope with each other without somebody getting pissed off!

Focusing on this chapter, we see some vulnerability and thawing out from both Rowan and Doug. You did a good job of handling what happened. I'm glad Rowan's safe, even though this experience is going to stick with her for a while. The last scene is very powerful, and I think you made the right choice in using 3rd person there. There were some light moments too, with the banter between Luma, Phantom, and Rowan, which was nice to see after chapter 9's serious tone.

As always, keep up the good work, and I'm anxious to see more!

Love these chapters please update soon

I cant wait until the next chapter! I was so excited when i saw this in my inbox. :D

I am so glad you updated this story. I absolutely love how you portray Rowan's character! Thanks for the update and keep it up!

Good job! Keep going!

You know, I have wished for many stories that I could review when they first started. But the one I wished the most was Pokemon: Johto and Kanto travels. I really liked it, and I have to thank Delu for introducing me to it via favorite stories. The story had something that made it fun to read, and while I usually fell as if I'm in a story when I'm reading it, I really felt attached to Rowan and Luma. Only problem is, I'm a boy. Anyway, my favorite part in the prequel to this was in the last few chapters, but it was bittersweet. I didn't want the story to end. But my review for this story is as follows.
I like that Luma and Vaporeon can talk now. Also, when will Mudkip and Treecko (I really hope I got them both right, because I can never remember Doug's starter) start obeying. Luma and Typhlosion as starters? OVERKILL MUCH? I can't wait for Ralts to become a Gardevoir. I've always liked Gardevoir, and reading Red Tide by Delu just made me like it even more. Anyway, I hope I can make up for all the time that I missed. Oh, and can Rowan get an Absol? Pretty Please?

I love the chemistry between Doug and Rowan please update. I wanna what other Pokemon their gonna have.

This is just one big lovers quarrel with bits of traveling. Fun times.

OMG I can't believe you updated again so soon! Doug needs a good smack to the head he didn't earn himself any points with Rowan in this chapter -.-. I find it sad though from out of her Hoenn party her Cascoon is her strongest X'D

Yessssssssss. You updated. I've been waiting forever and a day for this. :D Cant wait until the next chapter!

I'm still reading! OvO And very happy to see that the story hasn't been dropped.

Right when I was thinking of trying to find a good pokemon story you decided to update xD. I'm still interested in this story I just hope it doesn't take another year ..