Hey, it's been a few years, I was just wondering if you were going to finish this story? You mentioned in the Author's note that there was only one more chapter after this one. If you can't finish it, may I know how it ended? This was a wonderful story. A fascinating continuation of the Inheritance trilogy. And you wrote as if you were Christopher himself. You kept all the characters true to the books. The idea of dark riders was something that I think should be unfolded to its extent and maybe written as a book in, and the idea that Orrin would attack Alagesia was something that followed the ending of Inheritance. Overall, thank you for such a great read and I hope to read more soon!

Legacy is a continuation of this story although it's short only 2 chapters so far

great story

I love the story! I doubt you check this anymore

Thank you for creating this story

So where's the last chapter you were talking about, it's been three years

Urgralgra not urgala, urgala sounds like arugula

Please post the next chapter!

Awww

Since I started reading I have thought that you should look over your work to check for mistakes, as I seem to see one at least once in every five lines. Other than that I love it, the story is good and I like what you have done with the characters.

I love your story! After I finished the Eragon series I was really sad, but your story has those feelings that I miss and you made me experience again, thank you :)

This is an amazing story and I respect you greatly, don't stop doing what you like an never let life take you down.

It's beautiful! I love the ending, it wasn't hanging at all because we know of the bright future ahead of them and endless possibilities. Thank you for not abandoning the story despite all you have gone true, you are a writer to the heart. Be well and take care of yourself! The characterization is perfect only with minor inconsistencies like how eragon and the dragonriders become vulnerable to Orrin's soldiers when they are highly skilled and experienced in fighting. I love how you imply things between Arya and Eragon that would otherwise be ruined if written elaborately. Thank you for this amazing story and may the stars watch over you.

Good chapter, though I was surprised to see Nasuada give up the throne. I'm sorry this story is coming to an end, but stories can't go on forever.

The Queen is thinking of retiring?
Can't say that I blame her. XDD