Loved the idea of rumor articles. Some misuse of words, I think - emitted s/b admitted; alternate s/b alternative; 'your mad' s/b 'you're mad'.

I'm enjoying the banter; her crankiness, especially!

Very good; loved the writing and dialogue. You need some puncuatuon, especially commas to indicate a pause or to make the sentence more clear.

I really like it:) cant wait for the next chapter!:)

LOL I love Caskett banter

Love the idea! Definitely would like to see where you go with this )

I really liked it please keep writing

Cute. Just out of curiosity, I wonder why the fan fic writers make such a big deal out of paparazzi. In reality, search as you might you won't find any stories or photos from the paparazzi for Patterson, and he is a much bigger deal than Marlowe's character, Richard Castle. In reality, I don't think anyone would really care all that much.

Funny! I like it! Sounds perfect for mid-season two!

Must not type reviews on phone ! I love this idea. Is what I meant to say.

Oh I live this idea. Very clever and well written. Cant witt for the multi bit.

This was good! I liked the ending and Montgomery scene best.