Dark...very Dark.. I cried at the ending. the turns and jumps in the story compelling and just gripping. But a sad sad end for harry and the flock.

*Ties the pink toad to a pole and makes her watch as I burn all her kitten plates ND ugly pink clothes before tossing her to Dementors* I really, really, REALLY hate Umbitch...

Good Lord.

I would favorite this if only I could I just reading the regular maximum ride combined with harry and voldemorts encounters. I simply can not favorite this story because I am so emotionally invested in the story good writes make that I feel their every emotion and pain in my heart as my mind gives me phantom pains based on theirs, even their emotional pains. Oh god I'm heart broken, my commendments to your for being a great writer and writing a great book that if not for my sensitivity, I would have favorites and read truce each week.

This... just isn’t working for me it’s not really bad it’s just... fuck I don’t know! It’s a bit to ‘oh one coincidance after another’ and it’s not super great dialougue or internal monologue, but it’s not bad... contrived maybe? Like all the crap is just happening too fast? Still one of the best attempts at a maximum ride crossover I’ve seen.

Well that's a shit way to end a story. Congrats, don't think I've ever been so disappointed in the end of a story before~

What an ending ( 0 0 ) I have no words I can't even

hope this isnt the end of the story...

not bad

Oh...
My heart...*cries*

Wtf that can't be the end what about voldy

WHAT THE HECK. I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT I WAS GETTING INTO WHEN I STARTED THIS BUT THAT'S NOT WHAT I EXPECTED. MY MIND IS NOW ASSAULTED WITH IMAGES I DON'T WANT. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL IN AN ABSOLUTELY HORRIFIC WAY. I'M FREAKING OUT. WHAT.

WHAT THE FUCK
THIS BROKE MY HEART
IM DEAD NOW WHYYYYYYY
I CAN LITTERALLY FEEL MY HEART THROBBING
YOU KNOW THAT FEELING THAT COMES WITH INCREDIBLE SADDNESS OR FEAR WHERE YOU FEEL YOUR HEART CLENCH
I CAN FEEL THAT
YOU RUINED ME

OMG! This was the best story ever! It's so sad that Harry died though. I can't wait to read more of your fanfics! They are sooooo good!

Omegersh, I love this story! I always loved the stories where harry is the center of attention and is battered in some way. I'm reading this for the 3rd time!