finally! gosh that was intense! and I loved every minute of it

A Wonderful story. Will you consider continue it?

Best Tohru and Hatori story I've read!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

I like the premise for this, and how they don't want to admit that they love each other. I do think the ending was a little rushed, and I think if I had been Tohru, Hatori would have actually scared me by pushing me into the door after she'd been pushed into the car. Having been in a similar situation, that fear is hard to get away froom, and it doesn't matter what triggers it, it can affect how you see anyone around you, no matter how close you are. Good job though

This is the sweetest thing i have ever will not believe how much i adored this story. a million stars go to you

I love this! So good and so romantic.

so cute!

This is a touching story and deserves a standing ovation in the idea of alternate universes :-) I like seeing some more adult themed stories that aren't completely sex or abuse or angst. This story had just enough of each to make it a nice one-shot that ended exactly as it should have.

I didn't find any mistakes in the story; grammar or spelling, so I have no constructive criticism to give.

Thank you for the entertainment.

Cheers!