"He couldn't hurt Kyle... he loved Kyle."

Right! Because strangling the night before screams true love.

I've been in a rereading knack for a while now, and I couldn't help but notice that a majority of the argument between Stan and Wendy was cut? Like, it was more venomous than what had happened before the new version.

I'm not saying I prefer the old, I actually like this one better! I'm glad the Wendy dislike is out of the picture, despite I don't totally care for her unlike other girls. (glances to Karen McCormick) I'm glad that she and Stan could become friends again within the fanfiction, and that Wendy knows where her heart really belongs, as well as Stan's.

Out of curiosity, I have taken notice that you've sprinkled a few drops of Bridon/Wendy throughout a couple of your fics. By any chance we'll see a oneshot between them sometime? (personally, say Wendy helping Bridon out of the abusive household that is run by his father) Or another particular hetero ships?

I'm not even gonna fujibg try I'm betting all my money that the step father tried to kill cartman I am so frickinv sure

I think I should congratulate you... 'cause you're the one that got me interested in Dip... and before I knew it, I've started shipping them. :D I hope you could write a story about them after your present Kyman fic. I'd love to see them as kids. Innocent love is the best love there is. :)

I am just saying that wendy totally got owned in this chapter th as ts what she gets when plays mind games with stan stenny forever

I'm surprised there has been no mention of Patty Nelson anywhere in this story. XD Since Cartman officially has feelings for her, you could have easily used Patty instead of a stand-in OC.

But I like Melanie. Her description does seem to fit the show; moreso as a oneshot character. Maybe she'll be featured in a new story of yours?

Happy ending! ... Well, not your typical happily ever after, but you know what I mean. Hooray for an in-character Cartman! :D

I loved the true love's kiss part. It was so sweet, and Kenny's so loyal to Stan. This chapter reminded me so much of a fairy tale. I've been reading through this fanfiction like crazy and I for one think it's very original. You've done a lovely job so far! :)

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh yaoi!

Now this is a triangle that I can live with! I'm no Kyman fan (I feel that if they were to get into a romantic relationship, it would ruin their rivalship as a whole), but I think this chapter, indicating how Butters would give up everything for Cartman to return home, made me into a Cartters fan. I usually root for the underdog pairings... that's just me. :)

I remember reading this a couple months ago, I'm so glad I've found it again! I totally loved this story and it's really well written. Loved all the ships too ahh _

*crys* i love dip :') that was so cute what you did with damien and pip i wish you never stop making fanfics *fanboy scream* i love you so much!

I read this once before I got an account... I'm so glad I was able to find it again!
It has to be the best South Park fanfic I've read.

wow this iz gettin RLY interesting :D i lik how u kept em character, n tht ur not makin em teenz lik evry1 else iz, so far ur story fits w/ the real south park, i mean u didnt completely change the atmosphere of it... n i feel lik if cartman rly did lose his memory hed act lik how ur portraying him in ur story... anywayz i bet my review iz confuzing lolz XD bt ya, ur a gud writer

I loved it. Very beautiful.