This was so so so good! A true emotional roller coaster! I actually really liked not knowing if they would make it while reading the story. You wrote it beautifully! I would love to know how he wined and dined her but i can imagine!

Fantastic. Pleaseeee write a sequel!

Please write a sequel!

It was really a beautiful story. But still Bella should tell her mother the truth and the way Edward keeps on asking for chance it's like the monster in him is still alive.

This is a great story. The subject matter can be a little hard but these things do happen. Not everyone is an abuser by choice. Violence and anger is something that can be passed down in families, just like many other things. The difference is if the person realizes they need help and actually seeks it.

I had been in a relationship were it was emotionally and mentally abusing. I told him that they needed help, they needed to talk to someone. They said that they would and never did. And that is the difference. If you are willing to admit your mistakes and take responsibility then at least your trying to be a better person. People can change. It just depends on if they are willing enough.

It is a very hard topic to write with and talk about, but you did it beautifully.

You did such an amazing job! I really enjoyed this fanfic is was very original. You had me obsessed not knowing how they were gonna resolve their issues and whether they would get back together. I want to think they made it work. loved it!

Ok this is just a story but really it's hard to imagine a young teen who claims to love a girl, kidnaps her, physically and mentally abuses her and I'm guessing raped her, held her against her will and yet three years later now he's the head of a billion dollar company and he runs it and he's still hunting down the forced wife who threw herself off of a bridge to get away from him...ok, let's see how this goes from here.

It's hard enough to read about abuse but if this is going to be constant fear and violence I don't think I'll be able to read it all. I'll keep going to see if it gets better but really how bad is it that Bella's boyfriend is obsessive, trying to control her but now he kidnapped her, got her pregnant and Bella didn't go to her mother for help? Really? Instead she lets her daughter go to a soup kitchen with a teen stranger...it's too much.

Bella was right to distance herself from her abusive boyfriend. I give her credit for being strong enough in character to realize she doesn't deserve someone trying to control her. Obviously this Edward has some issues. I want to believe MOST everyone can change with enough desire to do so and to work to change. What I do believe is that without the strength to stand up to an abusive partner a woman can find themselves 'stuck' in a life where they can't seem to easily leave the abusive partner. I do think abuse in any form is a deal breaker period and has to be dealt with. In this day of the Me Too movement this story is very relevant.

OMG! I think this is my favorite fan fiction story as of yet. You are an amazing writer. This story was so emotional and uou have the ability to really make me feel for the characters. I would absolutly read your books if you ever come to publish something. Keep it up.

Definitely a story you could do a sequel on! One of my favorites on the site. You could easily write about the Russian mafia coming back into their lives, or Carlisle’s past making a mess of Edward’s happiness. Another direction for the sequel could be that Bella finds out she’s pregnant again and having severe anxiety about it due to the flashbacks from the very stressful first pregnancy. There are many directions it could take. Anyway, one of the best stories on the site, and definitely worth a sequel.

Definitely follow up with a sequel!

Definitely write a follow up story- my favorite one on the site. You are a great writer- I like what you did with characters.

I would live to see a sequel to this story- well done!

Definitely write a sequel- one of the best stories I have read on the site, and I have been an editor for over 23 years. Great job- nice redemption story.