This was sweet. Sorry to see it unfinished, but at least your stopping plot was somewhere I could tack on "and they lived happily ever after."

UPDATE! gahh its ben killing me, waiting :(

aw, loving this story!

Your doing amazing at this! You change the characters just the right amount. There still their typical selfs but changed in a way that allows then to be in a relationship. Great job, keep writing (: 3

Hmmm this has promise. The way you write things sounds natural, but the way you present them is not. Put a comma before the end quotation mark when someone says something, unless you don't say "she/he said" etc after it, then just put a period. Also, start a new paragraph when each person speaks. Okay? If you do that, you will have a reader out of me! :)

Yes our Sheldon is a little slow! but he'll get there in the end

nice chapter well done

I loved this chapter.

I love how they're acting so hesitant and unsure when they woke up, but I'm sure Penny is about to remind him why she's a big ol' five! I can't wait for the reaction back home to Sheldon's newest Youtube sensation video(especially Howard's comments). I hope they go back to home or the gang goes to New York, so their friends can get into the mix of things. Can't wait for the next update:)

OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH MYYYYYY GGGOOOOISSSHHHH! this chapter was just as good as the last one! I don't know if you read the last review that I sent to you for chapter eight or not but as always keep up tge fantastic work my friend! Hope Sheldon confesses hid love to girl sooner than later; D

so sweet! Update soon - again!

awww i love how he woke up, he only freaked a little bit, good for sheldon. you are really good about keeping him in character. and how she is just clinging to him in her sleep should really let him see how much he means to her. but of course he had to get up to stay on schedule. i know a lot of people who find comfort and feel safe when they adhere to a schedule, i wonder if when he was little if he had any control over it and now that he is an adult he holds on to his schedule to maintain the control he has now? anyway love the parallel to the last time he got really drunk, even though he didnt lose his pants he did have a mirror moment with the youtube didnt he, and he saw them kissing, how great was that. vintage video games with his best girl what a great way to end his day, and yeah a train ride home would give them some much needed alone time so that they can face their friends when they get back to pasedena. :) sorry i'm a bit long winded but i really enjoy this story :D cant wait for the next chapter

That Marie is diabolical. Sheldon hugging Penny is too cute!

This was a great chapter. I love how Marie is going to show the guys what happened!

i love it that she is so into making them finally realizing their relationship. they needed a good push, she is channeling loki, i loved that reference. i hope that they see thier own video so that they can see for themselves how perfect they are for each other. i like marie's POV but can we get more of sheldon's, he just has this very innocent look at everything and i wanna know how he feels waking up to penny in his arms the next morning, will he be discusted that they are so close, or will he be emotional and see how perfect that moment can be. i wanna see the inner romantic in him i guess. because i know that he is very internal when it comes to emotions but he is such a fan of superheroes and fantasy that he doesnt realise how romantasized those stories really are. she's his maryjane, or his lois lane,...his catwoman! and he just got a good push curtisy of marie. :) cant wait for the next morning :)

I think that Marie is one lab accident away from being a super villan - in a good way, though! Update soon!