This story was so intriguing, I found myself on the verge of tears. It was amazing. Keep it up! c:

Even though the topic is horrifying, the story itself was intriguing and sad but also able to make you want more. Beautifully written. You are a wonderful writer and I sincerely hope that you keep writing.

Normally I don't review but this was written exceptionally well and hope you continue with it.

Your story is so good and so heartcrushing at the same time, you made me cry (T_T).

It's a great story. Very heartbreaking, sad to know many children suffer from this disease every day.

This is really heartbreaking espcially since last night I found . It's a blog from a mom who's son passed away with cancer and discusses childhood cancers ... if you're interested give the site a look. But this story was written well and it captured the moment however sad it was.

Your story is very good and sad, I hope you continue with it.

That's...horrible...and really well written.

Perfect.

This story nearly killed me.

I'm soo excited you decided to post. You do realize that now you've posted there is no going back!

(Ren will like to tell you I'm a sociopath)

I haven't even made it out the door for work today and my make up is already ruined. Tears! You did a very good job with this. Excellent really.

Holy Hell woman, where have you been hiding! Well, now that we know what you can do, you'll never be able to stop writing. That's just a fact. If you ever need anything read over or beta'd just let me know!

I can't tell you how excited I was to see that you had posted this fic, m'dear!

I would love to be able to pick one part out over the others as my favorite, but I just can't. The whole piece is just so artfully crafted. I love the way you drew the comparisons at the beginning, and the way you kept us guessing about what, exactly, was going on.

The end though... OMG. It doesn't matter how many times I read it, I get choked up.

This piece is truly a work of art, and I hope it is just the first of many!

Welcome to the fic writing club! :)

Aww, this is so sad! But it's really good, haha ;) I remember my very first story on here, it sucked compared to this :P you did really great! :)

It was good and I am hoping the next chapter is not far behind.

well, you got me. waterworks are all systems go. great job!