Tag this under comedy cause that’s what it is. A joke

mc is too young

wasent really a good idea on my opinion that you made mc show them all of his weapons

wasent Shepards first name in the last chapter Cassandra and you wrote her as Angela so which is it?

i really hope that the mc wont look like Kaidan he looked stupid in my opinion

This Story is complete garbage from just another Fallout NV fanboy who worships the game.

10/10 fight (rape) scenes where he just fucking obliterates everyone with his DEW's.

R.I.P Freedom Guard

For what it's worth, I read elsewhere that it isn't just this story that is dead; sadly, the author is as well. I don't have any information other than reading that Freedom Guard died some time ago. RIP.

Jack. It'll be fun.

Too bad this fic is dead. I wold have loved to have seen Travis ride a thresher maw like and sandworm and enjoy the wonderful world of Tuchanka .

Azure Breeze. Otherwise known as the queef.
Azure is asari slang for vagina. Good ser author that was either the best joke name I've seen or a slight oversight, either way bravo. :)

shame you abandoned this story, it had potential.

Grunt buddy, please update this awesome story it is far too awesome not to do anything with it for about 7-8 months.

do you think you can add the lone wanderer as a squad mate and or maybe add in a courier/wanderer/shepherd/Miranda romance if not courier/shepherd/Miranda

jack

p.s the wanderer can arrive in a teleporting accident like the courier when going to the alien ship again.