Lisa McMann? I was thinking Ulquiorra would be more the non-fiction type since he had the "my eye sees all and if they don't, they don't exist" speech.
I guess I like the OOC-ness of these characters since the plot is interesting and I like AU fics.

Really great idea. Although I do feel like Ulquiorra would be more of a Kafka guy. Maybe 19th century Russian lit? That's some pretty depressing existential stuff.

So you finally updated huh? After what, a year? XD

By God you finally updated!
That being said, I refer you to my earlier statement on tumblr: GET ON GOOGLEDOCS YOU BUTT. YOU NEED TO READ IT AND I'M STUCK.
Also, it had some editing issues, but that can be fixed at a later date.

Can't wait for the last one was awesome. I like how Orihime decides to find out what is going on in that room. I hope nothing bad happens to any of them. Btw I should mention you're AWESOME and so is this fanfic of yours.

Hahahahaha great chapter! But oh my goodness... Poor Grimmjow Dx

Ahhh! Need more!

MOTHER OF. IVVVVYYYYYYYYY THIS IS NEVER GOING TO END

This was so awesome! But now what're they gonna do?! :O
And lol, life of course! School work stressing for no reason, getting no sleep cause I stay up late watching anime... ;D

oh dont get me wrong i love ya too but WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMORE AUGH

Well it's getting interesting. How'd Ishida know to cover his eyes?

I wouldn't have guessed the RENT reference if you hadn't said it, but now I see what you did there ;) anyway, Are Ichigo and the others affected by Aizen now?
(Dalek voice)
EXPLAIN
EXPLAIN
EXPLAIN

everyone is an idiot but it makes the story so awesome

Oh my we had a love moment. No I'm not a red head but its a light brown/ dark red/ tiny amount of blonde streaks. Hell it all depends on the sun or season. Dunno how it happened but I'm like an oddball of my family. No one looks like me.

Loved it! Sorry this isn't a very long review, im just so. Tired.
Hahaha can't wait for the next update!