Nicely done.

The secret levels of the Diet Building? Is he with JPs? :D

ahh jeeze this is good wish there were MORE! I always loved the idea of Seven and Lotus together. I just finished the entire game and I miss those two characters the most. Would love some sexy fics of them!

I love this story! I wish more people knew about the awesomeness of 999 so that there might be more fanfics like this. Seven and Lotus just seem to fit together like puzzle pieces, but that's just me.

More theories for the world of 999.

I always liked the idea of Seven and Lotus - since they argue so much, it just fits. Really interesting story, by the way.

I liked it a lot! Shame there's so few reviews...

I love Seven and Lotus as a couple, and I thought this did a good job showing them without being too "whrilwind romance"-y, as some stories get to be.

I thought the mystery was good; not too simple it's boring but not too complex you have no idea what's happening. Oh, and I love the twist with Ito's father.

Ryouta I liked bacause he was a good... I'm not sure what. He was like Zero, having a big impact on the story without following you around everywhere. I liked that fact-He was a force you could feel throughout the story.

All in all, I did really like it! Nine Hours, Nine Persons, Nine Doors really needs more fanfiction (expecially romance!), so thanks for writing this!

This is so awesome! . Lotus and Seven is my favorite pairing in the game. :P Good job .