i enjoyed this greatly. love their relationship with each other and the other characters. found family tropes are awesome. i feel terrible for draco in this chapter, and i hope he finds a way out. thanks for writing! please update!

update? ::)

I love this story. Great writing, compelling characterizations, interesting plot, what's not to love?
I'm glad that you don't immediately make Slytherins "the evil ones," that's always bugged me when people do that.

Oh my god this fanfic! ThNk you so much for continuously updating I'm obsessed

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Gracias por actualizar estuve esperando ansiosamente otro capítulo de esta maravillosa historia

Good story

I love it you are amazing keep the good work

Hermione should have done what did to Draco in second (or was it third?) year, and use her free arm to CLOBBER Ron instead of letting him do that to her. Or better yet, even if he was holding both her arms, use her only weapon and lift up one of her legs and KICK him where she KNOWS it'll hurt most for instant release. *lol*

Okay, so I was enjoying the Hermione/Pansy(not enough of it imo), though as others have said, the progression of the relationship is a bit rushed and Ron's actions are heavily OOC. It's cool, whatever, you're hardly the last person I've seen to bash him... but what I haven't seen is anything complaining about Sheridan. I have no idea if she's an OC from another fic of yours, or a character you came up with and added on a whim, but she doesn't seem to add much to the scenes she's in. She's there, hogging the limelight in multiple scenes... and I can't help wondering 'why do you exist, random OC with unrealistic menagerie of beasts? Why are you acting like such a cliche Mary Sue in this otherwise okay fanfic?' I know she's a summoner and stuff, but why is she here? What does her presence add to the story? I would argue that her existence and constant misuse of French words actively makes the story worse in several places. Literally, at the point I'm up to, she could just not exist and the plot would stay the same.

Might read more of this, idk, but needed to vent a bit either way. Best of luck with your fic.

Please, please, please, please, please, please, please continiue this story!

Please, please continue this story!

Please tell me there is more to this!

Just found your story and I love it! Really hope you updat soon!

good hope for more