Wait- Midnight Sun? Isn't that a new movie though?

inevitable not ineddible :

I just don't understand why he compromised and then thought that they'll thank him for it. The minute you start Compromising, it's the end of your choice. They'll then do whatever they think. He should've just resisted any way he could

Not sure whether it was intentional or not, but in reality card counting is legal although frowned upon by casinos

In my opinion the baseball game in this chapter is very well written.

A* :D Love it!

I enjoyed reading this and I plan to read all of them!

Hello, I just got done reading this fic after doing a search of OC. I'm so glad I clicked this link. I love that you have created a character that is believable, has a history, is likeable, but still has flaws. I think that you interwove him into cannon perfectly, and built on the story without making it farcical or "mary-sue ish"
Thanks for taking the time and effort to upload. Apologies for the lame review at the end rather than chapter by chapter, I'm actually about to start the 4th one you have in this series but felt I had to send a thank you note because it is all I think about, and I'm dreading not having the next chapter on hand.

Cheers,

Pockets

(Just remembered my login password :) )

Hello, I just got done reading this fic after doing a search of OC. I'm so glad I clicked this link. I love that you have created a character that is believable, has a history, is likeable, but still has flaws. I think that you interwove him into cannon perfectly, and built on the story without making it farcical or "mary-sue ish"
Thanks for taking the time and effort to upload. Apologies for the lame review at the end rather than chapter by chapter, I'm actually about to start the 4th one you have in this series but felt I had to send a thank you note because it is all I think about, and I'm dreading not having the next chapter on hand.

Wow, loving the story so found it. Wish there were more oc stories like yours.

You got a fave from me.

i loved the baseball game in the book too. It was so great to see them just having fun together, wasn't it? I hate this part though. Why oh why don't they just handle the nomads right here and now? grin.

Too cute. I love how much he tried in this chapter, though Jasper and the dictionary made me laugh in the previous one. But Chris is really making an effort in this one, and I feel incredibly proud of him. And now he likes Bella.

i wanted to follow up what I said last chapter, because I don't want you to think I don't like Chris. I love him. I think he's a great blend of boy and maturity, and I like how you show those sides. I think he's being judgmental of his brother and a girl he's never met, but aren't teenagers a bit judgmental at times?

Ooo, more brattiness. Judging and being angry at Edward without talking to him. As his brother, Chris should stand by edward, even if he doesn't always agree. and right now, how can he agree or disagree, since he doesn't understand what's going on? And he dislikes Bella without ever speaking to her.

Ooo, Chris is kinda bratty sometimes isn't he? But what I like about that is that it shows his age and makes him real.