Reviews for Shattered
Esso1979 chapter 32 . 3/7
Ok it’s 2020 now. I have reviewed other stories, stalked you on twitter! It is time for u to come back and complete ur stories. Don’t let me feel u have abandon them. You gave us ur word and it’s in ur bio. Now that my rant is over...

Young lady return to ur stories NOW. Please and thank you!
Rokizol chapter 32 . 2/5
So I’m leaving this comment hoping someday you will find it in your heart to update this story. I read through it nonstop. It is THAT good. Thank you so much for this. Thank you for this gift.
Rokizol chapter 19 . 2/5
Hey it’s not sweet to make your readers cry! haha You know, I love all the humor you putted in this chapters. I love the relationship between those 2! For once, I wish Kag would fall in love with him instead of Sess. What he told her about Shippo was a low punch... but Kagome make Sess pay hell before you actually fall for him and even then... make him SUFFER!
Rokizol chapter 7 . 2/5
Each chapter is depressing me more and more... but it is so goooood damnit!
Rokizol chapter 5 . 2/5
Omg! I know this story is unfinished but I’m a sucker for angst so I don’t care (i mean, I DO care, but well, I can only ask for so much, right? ). Your story is truly amazing. As I am writing this, I feel so much anger towards Sesshomaru, and honestly I felt my heart cracked with what Kags said about not even his mate wanting her. It made me cry. With your writing you are pulling my heart strings to the point of rupture. So good yet so incredibly sad... anyway. I wanted to thank you for making me feel this way with your tale... thank you again.
nellstouch chapter 32 . 1/15
I love this story
Frog chapter 32 . 11/24/2019
Dear Kjpanny Kjchristie17,
I hope you're well.
I know it's been a while since you updated any of your stories.
Just wanted to let you know that your stories have not been forgotten and, they're still as Awesome to read as the first time I read them a few years ago ;)

If you ever Continue any of your stories I'd be more than happy to read them :)
If not; Thank you for writing and sharing your stories,
Sincerely Frog

P.s. I really hope you're okay :)
madmiko chapter 22 . 11/9/2019
I still just really don't understand why any of her friends would feel betrayed. I can see them feeling bad that she felt she needed to protect them at her own cost by sparing them knowing she was dying and seeing it happen in a slow, painful way. And Sesshoumaru just likes to show up and be a jerk. He has yet to say one kind thing to her-even a simple "I'm glad you are alive." No apologies, no explanations, no trying to make nice. Ugh!
madmiko chapter 20 . 11/9/2019
I feel so sad for Kagome. She asked Kazuki if youkai ever reject their soulmates and apparently, Sesshoumaru rejecting her is a complete anaomaly. So, naturally, she wonders what is wrong with her that not even her soulmate wants her. Truly heartbreaking. I don't understand her friends feeling betrayed. When someone you loves dies, wouldn't you be ecstatically happy to discover they were alive after all? Shippou is the only one having a normal reaction to that news. And the fact is that she was dying, and DID die. So, I am very surprised by their reactions.
madmiko chapter 19 . 11/9/2019
You know, considering Kagome was taking a bath when she died, she was naked during the entire confrontation with Sesshoumaru. I hate it that Sesshoumaru made her think she's a bad person.
madmiko chapter 18 . 11/9/2019
I loved the way Kazuki told Sesshoumaru off. He really thought he was just going to waltz in and get her and everything would be hunky-dory. He should really feel ashamed, and yet he still tried to manipulate her and make her feel bad by accusing her of abandoning her friends and Shippou. That was low. I'm surprised he left, though.
madmiko chapter 17 . 11/9/2019
How interesting that Kazuki's mother could bring her back! At first, when he asked if she would still be ill and in pain, she said she didn't know, but then he asked her to heal her and bring her back. So, I'm wondering if she is still sick. Such a beautiful, unconditional, unselfish love he has for her that he knows she will never be with him, even if he saves her. He is not going to be happy when he discovers Sesshoumaru is her soulmate. I hope he singes that gorgeous silver hair. LOL! And he didn't even get to enjoy her being back before Sesshoumaru arrived.
madmiko chapter 16 . 11/9/2019
That seems like a nice, peaceful way for her to go. Interesting that Kazuki can feel her slipping away like Sesshoumaru can. Sesshoumaru doesn't seem overly concerned that Kagome is ill with that particular sickness, and seems to still think she can be his mate and they can have children and all that, so he must be able to heal her. Too bad he let his pride destroy her.
madmiko chapter 13 . 11/9/2019
I read your author's note, and I'm sure someone else probably mentioned this long ago, but cancer would not cause Kagome to lose her hair. It's the chemotherapy treatments that cause that and she isn't undergoing any chemotherapy. So, no worries about that. This was a lovely look into Kazuki's feelings for her-very bittersweet. And she told him how Sesshoumaru's words affected her. So, so sad. I am wondering if mating with a youkai would cure her since she would receive her mate's youki. If so, I'm surprised Kazuki didn't offer.
madmiko chapter 12 . 11/9/2019
You are doing such a fantastic job with these conversations! I loved the way Miroku told Inuyasha that he was dishonoring her memory if he was denying they were family. Ah! Bokusenu set Sesshoumaru straight. And he called him out on being the reason Kagome's illness had become so much worse. Nice!
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