Yessssss. You've lost old man your manipulations won't work

Yay, go for it, Bill!
This is the first ff in which somebody brings up this argument and not just..well, go with the idea and the ritual and brings someone in the own dimension.

I love this story for it.

Niiice! I hope Tonks joins the pair.

i just found this, i would totally love to see this expanded! either way kinda awesome! thank you!

How awesome!

*whines lowly* W-Why haven't you updated...?
If you do, then I'm totally following this thing because I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT OK?! XD

You wrote this ages ago but I just found this. It was recced by a friend and I'm glad I listened to him.

So just letting you know I enjoyed this.

That was an interesting take! Funny too, I liked how Bill stood up for him and the twist with Harry being a girl! XD

Love it! Go Kick-ass Girl! Harry-and Hawt-as-hell! Bill.
I can't believe Bill's dad and brother did that. Asswipes
No one tried to stick up for him but Tonks? Sad.

This did do some fun things with the usual plot device of calling a "Harry" from another world to defeat Voldie. I especially liked the little twist at the end.

Good idea, good start that could turn into a brilliant story.

The only complaint I can make is that Harry left the Order of Cowards and Liars alive; all of them should have died that night, if only for their actions in kidnapping someone (regardless or their accomplishments).

Bravo - you made Harry a girl. BFD. If that's your plot twist its pretty tame, not to mention done before. Be nice if you labeled your story to reflect that - for a oneshot that is barely 4K words, I suppose it makes a fairly negligible difference - if you go multi-chapter with this, though, I'd be annoyed I wasted my time even opening it.

I did not think that Harry would turn out to be a girl. Even after the baggy shirt part. Anyways I really, really, really like this. I have an idea! You can make it more than a one-shot! More than one-shots are always fun.

cooool