This was so good! I loved every second of it!

First off I want to say that this is at least the second time I've read through this story. The first being back around 2010. I can't remember if reviewed before or not. If I didn't then Om sorry, and if I did then you eat a so for one deal.

This is so very well written. Unlike a lot of fan fiction, (my own included) it read as though I was a real book. It was insightful, funny, made me cry at several spots, and despite having already read the story, captivating. I've been reading nearly none stop for days, only stopping to sleep, go to work, and watch SailorMoon Crystal.

You did an amazing job with this. Truly.

i think your arguments why she had sex with the boy are strange specially if she says she loved ami all the years

Wonderful chapter! You brought tears to my eyes.
I was very pleased to read about how things happened between Rei and Minako. The first date, the first kiss and then the ring... Wow. It was extremely well done; very romantic and tasteful.
Thank you so much for this piece.

Loved the part where Rei "tells" Mamoru the "news"! I could imagine his dumbfound expression watching as she pulled Minako into a searing kiss right before his eyes! LOL!

I must confess I've started to read this only because of Rei and Minako, but the story revolving around Ami and Makoto got to hooked!

I read this between classes and work for a week. I just now got the time to review! Really love how you captured everyone!
The little Haruka and Michiru parts nearly killed my poor shipper heart.
Ami and Mako though... Perfect! Honestly.

Love that you brought the Outers in this but it just wouldn't have been right without them. _

I really know how Ami feels about finding out Makoto slept with someone else.

I can't wait to read more of this. Not sure why I have never read this before hand.

This has been a very good read. Thank you for writing it with such good pacing, storyline, characters and overall proper language. There were some repeated mistakes that, though a little distracting, can be ignored. 'Drug', for example.

I'll admit the pregnancy part was kind of weird, though it's mostly because when I think Sailor Moon, I think adventures with fighting the bad guys; not Sailor Moon characters living out normal everyday lives. However, holding regard only for the latter situation, I think you have written it very well. I think the Rei-Minako situation was nicely depicted-sorry to say, but I kind of liked their story better than the Ami-Makoto parts, though still very good.

Humour was very nicely placed and done. I couldn't help but smile at practically all of them. Usagi probably had all the funniest lines, and her character was not lacking despite being a side character here.

I'm glad you brought back the siblings in the end. Since their appearance, I've been wondering what their role was-just an enemy to reveal Makoto's situation, or something larger? Seems like it's the former now, but I like that they have a little characterisation anyway, and that there's some closure to their appearance.

So, all in all, very good job. And thank you for the read. Good luck with any future writings.

I was really into the story until the last chapter, I hate it, who r shin and all of them, I don't understand
Could u by any chance rewrite the last chapter plzzzzz :-)

One of the best long-running SM fics I've ever read! I hope you don't mind that I read it for the Rei/Minako. The way you portrayed them was so heartfelt, and I loved the background you had on them in contrast to Makoto and Ami. The fact that they're more like devoted best friends than lovers is so endearing, and I appreciate that the main source of conflict comes from their parents, and not each other because they understand each other too much.

Anyways, excellent story! This actually took me several months to read because I didn't want to rush reading your awesome storytelling. Bravo!

I really love this story, just read it for the third time...
Just, why "Ken"?! That creeps me out every time I read it!
But anyway, I love the sequel, too!

awesome writing. the story just flows and i couldn't stop reading it.

It has been a number of years since I read this and I really really enjoyed the re-read. I noticed you are working on another and I am very much looking forward to that. This was a very good story!