good job as always I usually don't like sad endings this one seemed fitting though at least

Oh my poor, sweet, baby Berwald.
Still, as sad as the ending was, I liked that you ended it that way instead of coming up with some bullshit happy ending.

This was so beautiful that I don't know how to express it through words. You have a talent, and you should continue writing. I cried multiple times and I don't know why it doesn't happen often. I just hope that one day I will be able to write like that. I don't know if you put great care into this or not, because some people can do amazing things without really trying, but this was beautiful if you tried or not. This is amazing, I loved it a lot, thank you so much.

It feels satisfying and unsatisfying at the same time, like I don't know how to handle it it's really weird omg. It was a really good story, I really liked it, and the ending was pretty realistic of what would happen I think if it could actually happen. Thank you.

Oh dear... This is going to be interesting I wanna know how they did it though since I'm sure Tino didn't teach him about human anatomy.

It's so cute I don't want Tino to leave, he might get really hurt again... And he'll hurt Ber's feelings...

Baby that's so cute that he doesn't like storms I just wanna hug him more. Tino baby, Ber put in so much effort, it's amazing.

Nice, Ber either can't see, or is colorblind. Poison berries. I was curious as to how Ber knew in the first place as to whether or not they were dangerous to Tino, but I figured it would be chalked up to the whole "Yes he knows English because fuck you I do what I want bitch and you will like it." Which is fine and makes it less complicated.

Yikes Ber don't freak the kid out so fast- well I mean how many times have you done this to know if it was bad or not? You don't know how humans work, to you, this could be perfectly reasonable.

Does he consider himself only a shark and not a shark man? Because if so, then Lukas, Matthias, and Emil could be there. Probably not though.

Lol he caught him a huge fucking fish. I wonder if Tino will ever make fire? I wonder if we'll find out exactly what happened? Lol if Ber tried to give Tino a bj he might accidentally shred his junk XD

Fucking hell, a sun burn like that... How is he able to bear the pain of it?

:'(

Love this sooooo much! XD

Oh my god that was amazing. I wish that there was a way for them to stay together! I want to cry at the ending so badly!

Love!