Reviews for Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. Really good writing. |
![]() ![]() How some reason I can feel the sensation of being strangled. Very powerful. Or my previous experience aided it a bit too well. Who know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Don't really know what to say to that. Nice bit of writing even if I didn't really understand why? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where's the rest of it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really nice work! I'm usually more a Setsuna/Marina shipper but I think this little piece is brilliant and realistic (somehow ... I don't know why actually ... guess it's the characterization) Keep up the great work! (I would definitely like to read more :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are parts when your writing is so beautiful - "the bleaching of his vision", "a haze of pleasure and pain, unsaid words and tainted feelings". I really enjoyed reading this. Nice work! |