Reviews for The First Christmas
X.pix.X chapter 1 . 12/25/2019
Amazing 3
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
This was very sweet. Loved how much you covered. It felt very real. I particularly enjoyed that you showed some conflict between Harry and Ginny but didn't make too much drama
Lydia chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
The cutest thing was that Harry had a room at the Burrow. And it makes total sense that he'd live there- Molly would insist, of course. Cute story!
nayin17 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
loved this
Lokken.8 chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Those were Merry Christmas indeed!
ECTO-DMC chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Liked it , and I think you captured PTSD fairly well. As a Military member (USAF) who has been to the Middle east I can tell you it doset take much to set me off and make me cry like a baby sometimes and I didnt even see anyone killed. Love and someone in my case my wife to talk to can be a god send .
DukeBrymin chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
I want to know what Molly told Ron after she dragged him downstairs-he really needs to sort out his priorities, doesn't he?

I was going to comment about the fact that H/G had barely started talking civilly to each other before he proposed, but then I thought some more and decided that I really liked that part. Even though they were having some friction, deep down they were in love, and knew that they belonged together.
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Beautiful story! I loved seeing how Harry & Ginny came out of the "funk" they were in for so long, and came back together. This was so romantic and hopeful! :) Very nice job! Please don't be offended, but there are a few spelling errors/typos I thought you might want to know about. (It's/its, breath/breathe, etc. appear to be confused in some places.)
Unoh chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
I didn't notice that you already published your christmas one-shot steve and just as I suspect its another beautiful, heart warming story staring our favorite couple, thanks again steve!
Secrets4theunderground chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Aww I loved this! They got their happy ending I am glad Ginny didn't take any of Harrys crap either. That boy can be a real debbie downer...
EmlynMara chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Wonderful story. Loved the way they took care of Angie. Poor George is really in a bad way, but it sounds like maybe, just maybe, there is light at the end of the tunnel. I liked the way you eased into Harry and Ginny's finding their way back to each other. The proposal seems a little rushed, in terms of they are just now starting to feel their way back into their previous relationship, but it's still sweet and wonderful.
michaelc100 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
great story but no mention of hermione
PadfootRocks101 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I really enjoyed your story! It is one of the best christmas based stories I have read all week! Long Live Harry and Ginny Potter! :D
sbmcneil chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
What a great Christmas story! It really it all of the emotions - the mourning, despair, hope and love - very well done!
AddyD90 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
great story... I was hoping get read yesterday but that didn't happened and then I had work and family boxing to go to... So watching all the HP movies is going to wait...

I loved the ending very cute

Can't wait to read your next story or update
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