Reviews for The First Christmas |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing 3 |
![]() ![]() This was very sweet. Loved how much you covered. It felt very real. I particularly enjoyed that you showed some conflict between Harry and Ginny but didn't make too much drama |
![]() ![]() The cutest thing was that Harry had a room at the Burrow. And it makes total sense that he'd live there- Molly would insist, of course. Cute story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those were Merry Christmas indeed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked it , and I think you captured PTSD fairly well. As a Military member (USAF) who has been to the Middle east I can tell you it doset take much to set me off and make me cry like a baby sometimes and I didnt even see anyone killed. Love and someone in my case my wife to talk to can be a god send . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to know what Molly told Ron after she dragged him downstairs-he really needs to sort out his priorities, doesn't he? I was going to comment about the fact that H/G had barely started talking civilly to each other before he proposed, but then I thought some more and decided that I really liked that part. Even though they were having some friction, deep down they were in love, and knew that they belonged together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story! I loved seeing how Harry & Ginny came out of the "funk" they were in for so long, and came back together. This was so romantic and hopeful! :) Very nice job! Please don't be offended, but there are a few spelling errors/typos I thought you might want to know about. (It's/its, breath/breathe, etc. appear to be confused in some places.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't notice that you already published your christmas one-shot steve and just as I suspect its another beautiful, heart warming story staring our favorite couple, thanks again steve! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I loved this! They got their happy ending I am glad Ginny didn't take any of Harrys crap either. That boy can be a real debbie downer... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story. Loved the way they took care of Angie. Poor George is really in a bad way, but it sounds like maybe, just maybe, there is light at the end of the tunnel. I liked the way you eased into Harry and Ginny's finding their way back to each other. The proposal seems a little rushed, in terms of they are just now starting to feel their way back into their previous relationship, but it's still sweet and wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story but no mention of hermione |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story! It is one of the best christmas based stories I have read all week! Long Live Harry and Ginny Potter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great Christmas story! It really it all of the emotions - the mourning, despair, hope and love - very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story... I was hoping get read yesterday but that didn't happened and then I had work and family boxing to go to... So watching all the HP movies is going to wait... I loved the ending very cute Can't wait to read your next story or update |