Awww! Pondpelt must be so jealous !

Wow, this was fucking horrible are you like some tort of gay cocksucker with no life whos like givin away stories and shit?

It's so sad at first, but it turns out absolutely wonderful. Just like Reedtail isn't good when it comes to talking to other cats, I'm not good with giving CC.

I noticed a small amount of spelling mistakes, however, it didn't particularly matter as they weren't very bad.

I loved how you potrayed the characters, but I may have one complaint; I think I would've liked to have read a little more about of every day Clan life for Reedtail, and not to just read about battles for most of the fic.

Otherwise, great job Loomie, and please continue writing! :D

~Midnight

**Nightpaw of LawlClan**

You published this forever ago, but I just found it...and I love it! It's...beautiful, really. I love Reedtail and how Mistybrook is injured and I just...wow. That's all I can really say. It's beautiful, really.

What a lovely story!But I can't beileve you deleted the Soul Eater story!My OC was in it!

That is so cute! I love it! :3