Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. please finish!

Please update!

Hey! Can't you update it? This is really good. I squealed when I read the part in the bath house, believe it or not. I'm only telling this you once, please update! Something like this should be... honored! XD

I really don't like cliffhangers, and that's why I'm reading the next chapter that I failed to see in livejournal. XD Awesome conversation between Jason and Reyna, by the way. ))

I really don't know why an awesome fic like this doesn't have the number of reviewers it deserves..

Good. Keep writing!

Review? You got it. I like this story, I truly do. However, I do not believe that Reyna and Jason actually kissed, especially when they were so young. It would be more realistic that they kissed a few months or weeks before Jason's disappearance but decided not to take it any further. I also have a question. Are you going to include the quests in this fanfiction?

-Jennie Spring

P.S. Reyna ROCKS!

P.S.S. UPDATE!

update like it

So far I absolutely love it! It's fun to see how their story progresses with time, you can definitely see them going from being awkward around each other to possible friends and hopefully more? I look forward to an update as soon as you can.

Great chapter! I love how you write their relationship.

Awwww!

Wow that was sweet, and having Reyna talk to Jason about her dad and being stuck on Circles island was really good. It's all really well written and I like how you wrote it in a way that he didn't 'get it' straight away, also I laughed a bit when I read about the guy walking in and ruining the moment...classic :) :)

The last chapter was also well written and I loved the way you portrayed the characters. Most have the two liking each other from the start or hating each others guts until something crazy happens and they change their minds. In yours however you had her hating him and him kind of not really minding her, it was good to see that she still kind of disliked him after their little adventure (not that I don't like Jason...I just thought it was very in character for her not to be fauning over him after that!) and taking his random adventure as him being idiotic instead of brave...also nice touch with having TTC appear in it, good to know what the time frame was.

So anyways I hoped I touched all of the bases and please update soon! :) :)

This was great, and I'm really excited that you're writing a multi-chapter Jeyna fic. (At least I assume it is since you don't have it listed as complete) You're an incredible author.