Never saw someone spill secrets so quickly or offer to live with a stranger after he over paid her to show him where things were, which she didnt know and jhad to ask the free gps lady that is available everywhere. So why overpay her for something that she disnt even do?

The monologue thing is shit.

I found this story while looking at someone else's fav list and I have to say I feel promise in the story this one is complete and your other hasnt updated since 2015 I hope to enjoy what you have put up and wish you the best in any future writing endeavors you have. Anyway on with the show.

I gave this a shot. I really did. But I just can't get into this. And I can see how this end all the way back here. This is a great story, and I'm sure people will love it, Its just not for me. Fair winds, and following seas.

If you had any kind of writing skill and creativity you would have had your character kill miranda, but your the kind of braindead moron that thinks referring to inner monologue every sentence is somehow a good thing.

Read the sorry so far it is good 4D4MADAM

No I have not read last this chapter.

I like this fic but I have to say the Inner Monologue thing got old a few chapters ago

Well this chapter pushed me right out of the immersion of the story. Why you break the consistency of the characters and the storyline? Good day, ser. Good fcking day.

Excellent story! Really, very well done! There were some times when I really hated this story, hated what happened, and hated Rob. But then I'd get past whatever was bothering me and realized it was a necessary part of the plot. Also, there were moments where something was obvious to me, but the characters were clueless. I felt like it was dumb for them to make mistakes like that, but I've realized that characters are still human (or whatever species they me be), and humans make a lot of mistakes, many of them really dumb mistakes. Kudos for remembering that fact and not making your characters super-observant-borderline-omniscient-people-who-never-miss-anything. Because that gets old.

Superb job! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I look forward to reading the sequels!

gosh its annoying when people in movies, anime, etc ignore obvious signs of things being different and massive clues.

What fucking beef do you have against garrus. He is really OOC.

Just saying that the moment cerberus gets the a bite to find and use Adam I am done. I can't stand them. I actually wish they were never implemented in the games at all.

ok dude its kind of insulting to say happiness is a rare accuracy in america. It is just as common as any other western country.

Very good work. It was an interesting and well written story. Well done.

if it was up to him we would have never discovered penicillin... oh look a unusual chemical reaction! Throw it in the garbage...
Very good story, nice work.