Reviews for Automatic |
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MacMan3679 chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 Hopefully, Robbie learns to grow a spine with Jade, and doesn't allow him to become her bitch. |
Aenarion28 chapter 1 . 2/15/2018 That part was classic, Jade claiming Robbie as her man. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2016 I can't believe them though, they get together days after the break up then act shocked when she's hurt?! |
findingthesunlight chapter 1 . 9/21/2014 this is really good, but i was iffy on the beginning and the length. but in the end, a lovely fiction. I’ll favourite. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2014 So sweet |
TensionRisingforyou chapter 1 . 7/21/2014 Wow this is such a great one-shot! Well done! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2013 I LOVE this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2012 That is perfect for Robbie and Jade. It was sweet, but not saccharine |
Lady Shaye chapter 1 . 8/23/2012 I ship Beck and Jade like Bright & Crane shipped Ross and Rachel. But it's impossible not to love this. :) |
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 Good Story |
cutterjohns chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 RobbieJade... now that's an interesting couple! I actually really like them together now after reading this. Like, I could see it happen. :) I love how you show the sensitive side of Jade without turning her into a complete mush-ball like other authors do. The dialogue between Robbie and Jade was awesome too, especially regarding the XBox. Overall this was a great piece of work and I hope you write more for these two soon! |
RaptorIV chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 That was awesome! Now of only I could fall asleep... But anyway, a sequel would be nice, as always, but this story seems almost perfect just the way it is. :) |
MaybeWolf chapter 1 . 12/20/2011 That was fantastic! Everything seemed perfectly in character from Robbie and Jade. For a first attempt at writing them together, you nailed it! |
ZenNoMai chapter 1 . 12/20/2011 YES! YES! YES! Now that was a Rade one shot! Oh man if you had entered my contest last month, I honestly think you would have won. That was awesome to some serious degree! Wow. Thank you for that story. |
BabyDavid chapter 1 . 12/20/2011 This story works so well because you take time watching the relationship between Robbie and Jade the same way the story watches Jade slowly explode. I think the ending is great. I'm so happy it ends on a happy note. And the scene after Jade spends the night is perfect. The questions are so jade, and the answers are so robbie and the kiss was perfect. Oh I love how you completely dispel the cutting great! |