This is awesome ! please continue!

One of the best M/SS fanfiction I've ever read *_* well done!w

Woah, Starscream is a sadist. But we all knew that somehow... xD

BTW, your writing is beautiful.

Just discovered this fic and am loving it. Deep, dark and wholly IC. Also deliciously sexy. _~

Interesting take on how Megatron brands Starscream, I really like how descriptive it is

This last chapter was so unbearably awesome iDi

I love the complexity of Starscream desires and the simple wit of Megatron.

You lady, have my thanks for such amazing writing... over and over again )

oh my oh my! this is becoming even more awesome!

Very nice! I really like how your developing their warped relationship, and the smex makes it ten times better!

I love this series. Just watching you build the emotional tension and sexual tension and other things I can't even name tension has just been so much fun and I hope it continues for a bit while longer.

Woah, this is intense. I'm really loving all the different dynamics here. Starscream playing hard to get, and Megatron being all, if that's how you want it, I'll give it you that , I am kind of wondering what Megatron is thinking about this. In Starscream's POV he seems incredibly powerful, mysterious and almost omniscient, but he's still determined to fight for every inch given.

I totaly agree with Ceris Malfoy , this story needs more love, I will be honest, the first chapter It kind of let me wandering what was going on but the rest its well written, nice story keep going on

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You know, I think it's a real shame that more people haven't reviewed this and given their love and support. I'm so surprised, I got off my lurking behind and decided to review it myself. XD

This fic is really well written and completely in character for them both, and I'm really loving the power plays going on. The last line of this chapter in particular was absolutely brilliant.

Looking forward to lurking around more,

Ceris

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Starscream approves of this chapter. Strongly.

Very nice, well written, and reminiscent of something that I shall likely see more of in the near future...

Great job. :D

Sheeeeesh, this was so steamy! 0w0

I really liked it, and you are writing awesomely as always D

Absolutely perfect.