Reviews for First Holiday Home |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2019 Sooo lovely! |
Jen chapter 1 . 10/13/2018 Thanks |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2017 Cute! I like Theo. |
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 1 . 10/25/2017 Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck. |
Hex chapter 1 . 6/15/2015 I can't stop smiling as I picture their beautiful family. |
patheticboneslover chapter 1 . 4/28/2013 this story (including the longer one) are so cute. so well done and i really enjoyed the babe theo parts. made it so believeable. good job :) |
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013 Gawds! So darn cute! Swear I felt warm fuzzies from Snape there for a few seconds... lol! , |
ds862 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013 This was fantastic as an epilogue! It was a great way to end the story. Well done! |
jules3677 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012 What a sweet tale to read on a murky cold day. Gave me a nice lift to read this gentle tale. Liked the interaction between Harry & Severus, very pleasing. Theo was a treat, well created. Thankyou |
Pyrane chapter 1 . 7/8/2012 Ahah ! Severus's quite used to be his "Daddy" now ;D Thanks ! ***Pyrane*** |
aliceAmnesia chapter 1 . 5/11/2012 haha love this story ! I read it and was thinking who wrote it since i didnt look first, when i saw ' ' i was like OH right obviously. all my fav stories are by you ! :D x |
Kaynova chapter 1 . 4/3/2012 I think this and the coiners paper trail are my favorite of your stories. I like the way that Snape stays snarky, and that Harry is both strong and vulnerable. I'd love to see another chapter in the story of Theo, Harry and Severus. |
htdcd chapter 1 . 1/4/2012 Well-written and engaging as usual :) I'd read anything you wrote - please tell me you're working on something publishable! I'd buy it. And read it. And love it. |
Kristine Thorne chapter 1 . 12/28/2011 This was really lovely. |
SnapesYukuai chapter 1 . 12/26/2011 Amazing story! _oh, and happy christmas, of course. Lovely scenes and I especially liked the idea of dinner with the Dursleys. Anyway, Harry Snape and Theo were simply adoring and brilliantly incharacter at the same time. Thanks for writing this, your Melfis. |