Wow. This is really good! Your writing is beautiful, and you captured some of the complex emotions. I also like how you explored Ismene, who is made out to be a minor character in the play.

Just one error, I'm not sure what you meant here: "Her long longs".

I also have one comment about when Ismene found out about Antigone and Haimon's deaths: I doubt she would be out shopping. I think Creon had her under house arrest or something; and even if she weren't, I doubt she would be shopping when she knows her sister is to be killed. But that's the only flaw I see here.

Overall, this is an excellent story. Keep writing!

Wow! What an amazing twist! Poor Ismene though... I can't imagine how painful it is to lose your family that way.