| Reviews for First to Die |
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  Marian Simonetti chapter 8 . 12/7/2019 Enjoyed this so much...well done...Were the names Scott and Josie done as a tip of the hat to Scott and his daughter Josie? |
| Marian Simonetti chapter 11 . 8/22/2019 Loved this...I don't post reviews on each chapter because I'm so into reading them...but it's all good... |
 Sabine68 chapter 11 . 6/3/2018 I don’t know why I missed this story up to now. It was so sweet and emotional. Great! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2017 Hope for once steve is the one tuey go after it's always danny and its predictable and annoying now |
| Lovingthis2much chapter 1 . 3/16/2017 Read this over and over, abandoning everything else I was supposed to be doing. While reminiscent of a Starsky and Hutch episode, the twists, turns and Five-0 characterizations were so excellently done, it was better than the S&H professional writers and it is a classic in its own right. All I can say is BRAVO! |
| Whumplove chapter 11 . 6/3/2016 love love love this story! |
| Skimball4 chapter 11 . 7/6/2015 Thank you for the delicious Steve whump...made my day. |
| Skimball4 chapter 4 . 7/6/2015 I bet it's his friend's mom...duh duh duh. |
| Skimball4 chapter 1 . 7/6/2015 I laughed so hard with that line about Steve catching "mad cow disease" from the bite that I scared my dog. That was priceless. |
| robinkristin chapter 11 . 5/16/2015 Great Story ! Thank You for sharing it |
| WolandR chapter 11 . 8/22/2014 I don't believe I ever reviewed this story (sorry about that), but this is one of my absolute favorites. Amazingly written and reads in one sitting (simply because it's too good to step away from for even a second). |
| FullSt0p chapter 11 . 4/19/2014 I know it's been long, but I couldn't pass without post this review. This is the best Whump Fiction I ever read, you made it perfectly. I'm reading it every day again and again without being bored from it. Everything is perfect bromance, ohana, whump, and Steve as super-seal, I'm in love with each word of this story. Thanks a lot for this great fiction, if there is a top 5-0 whump fiction I'm sure this one will gain it. |
| HardyGal chapter 11 . 8/7/2013 Dude, Steve's been through the mill! Bu he's alright, and that's what matters… |
| HardyGal chapter 1 . 8/7/2013 Book 'em, Danno! |
| mooner1999 chapter 6 . 3/5/2013 I just started reading this, so I'm just going to make a prediction even if everyone already has. I think it was Jules/Julie from that toy shop. I bet I'm completely wrong, but there's my guess. |
