That was so sweet that she felt the need to ask if he was sure *fangirly puddle*

Lol.
My fave is the engagement, followed by kono uding her sex appeal. N calling steve boss

I was basically horified to find out that I'd neither reviewed nor favourited this fic. I'm going to write something about each section and my review may be slightly too long (I hope you don't mind and I'm on my phone so I'm unable to paragraph properly, it'll be in one massive chunk). The first section was hilarious, it's understandable that Kono sprained her ankle whilst attempting to chase a suspect because I can barely walk in the things but she still went on to catch them! The part about Steve looking after her made me swoon, it was so sweet.

For the second part, I felt you got Danny's character to a t. In fact, you got all of them down to a t and I'm also glad that you had Steve acknowledge that it'd be hypcritical for him to lecture Kono because he does similiar things on a daily basis. Kudos to Kono for still winning an argument even whilst medicated!

The third part was absolutely hilarious! Steve is not only obsessive about Kono eating on his bed but aparently about her eating habits despite the fact that she'd been swimming and surfing before. Kono basically coming over to have sex with Steve: HOT!

I agree with Kono saying falling back on her sexuality was basically what they had her do when doing UC work. The line about how Steve knew better than anyone else that she was a girl had me giggling ridiculously! I loved that you snuck some jealous Steve into there too!

The final part was ridiculously cute and your characterisation was spot on. Bless Kono and her insecurities asking if it was for her and if he was sure he wanted to propose to her, aww. I loved the use of minimal words on Steve's part because in some fics were he proposes they have him saying really long speeches whuch I feel is OOC but you did it perfectly! Steve's plans on how to propose to her may have been ruined but I still felt the proposal was incredibly sweet and very fitting!

.:LOL!:. This was perfection. It had everything that makes a perfect fic. Humour, fluff, teasing, jealous!Steve, possessive!Steve, nakedness, sex. God, perfect!

I screamed and jumped around when I read this chapter, it is so good.

This was good. It was funny too and you really managed to keep them all in character despite the short scenes and romance aspect to it. The proposal at the end was good too. It wasn't awkward or too cheesy, and it wasn't wordy, which is something that Steve wouldn't do. It fit them well.

I can't believe I only found this story now! It's PERFECT in every way! The pacing, the characterization, the 5 things, just wow. Please don't make this the end, I (and I know many others) would love to see a sequel, like when they do actually get married!

The length was perfect. A beautiful story. Can you do the same story from Steve's Point of View? I just can't get enough.

Wonderfully written. I absolutely love it- it captures Steve and Kono perfectly. I keep reading it because it is one of the best Five-0 stories I have ever read.

Hi! I read this story and I really like it! Here are some of my favorite parts!

"If that's the case then, boss, your hand in my hair is borderline on sexual harassment. Actually, given how we're sat, I'd say you've crossed that line." She didn't have to look at him to know that he would have set his jaw and be giving her a steely look.

Danny's sigh and dry chuckle told her that she hadn't hid it as well as she would have liked. "Steven is going to kill me," he groaned, walking in a full circle before stopping and pointing at her accusingly "You do realise that, right? And then, he's gonna put you through the wringer too. That, however, I'm gonna enjoy." She didn't bother pointing out the fact that he wouldn't be able to enjoy it if he was dead. It seemed irrelevant and she knew how the littlest things could push him into a spin.

Kono laughed at his extremeness. "What, you scared of the boss or something?"

"Yes!" Danny exclaimed in exasperation. "He carries grenades with him. So yes, yes I am slightly fearful of what he might do."

"No," Kono scoffed, laughing softly. She got an unimpressed look in reply. "I'm sorry, do you agree when he tells you what you do is reckless or irresponsible or just plain insane?"

"That's not the point," he replied. When she merely smirked, he unfolded his arms and nodded slowly, exhaling deeply. "Alright, I get it. It would be hypocritical for me to lecture you about what you did," he admitted defeatedly, hands up in the universal sign of backing off.

Steve began to stir as she climbed on the bed, kneeling on the side left empty by her lack of presence the night before. The sheets had been pushed down towards his waist, allowing her the sight of his bare back. Barring a few scars, it was as smooth and as toned as the rest of his body, something that she knew from firsthand experience.

"Hey," he murmured, blinking away the sleep as he turned over onto his back, bring him right up next to her. Kono shifted slightly so that she could lift her left knee to rest on the other side of him, effectively straddling him.

Steve remained quiet at the accusation, simply offering her the smile that neither denied nor accepted her words, but instead made her forget about what it was that they were talking about. Kono shook her head, mostly at herself for letting herself fall for his charms even after knowing him for so long. She really needed to work up a defence against it. Soon.

But in the meantime, she allowed him to tug her closer as he moved his hand from her leg to her back, pulling her towards him as he sat up and wound his other arm around her. She grinned slyly when her lips met his, letting it fade slowly as they got carried away, breaking only when it became necessary to breathe.

"I'm guessing you came over for a reason other than to argue," he asked her, pulling her tighter to him whilst trailing his lips down her jaw, back towards her mouth.

"Nope. Arguing was pretty much the plan," Kono lied, keeping back a moan at his ministrations when he kissed her again. There was a smile playing on his lips as he did so, but before she even got the chance to think about it, he had flipped them over with her now on her back and him hovering over her. It explained the grin. She should have guessed; he always had control issues. Not that she minded, most of the time.

"I hate plans," he muttered in between chaste kisses. "They never go accordingly." Kono giggled at his words. Not where you're involved, she added silently in her head. It didn't seem like the right moment to bring it up.

Steve kept quiet as she eyed him before letting out an exasperated sigh. "Fine. Just-" he paused, as if he couldn't believe they were having such a conversation. To be fair, she couldn't either. "Not in front of me, alright? Otherwise, someone might just get hurt."

For some reason, simply hearing the confirmation threw her into a spin suddenly. "Oh," was all that she could get out.

Silence fell between them before Steve exhaled out loud. "Ok, this is pathetic," he told her, and she had to agree. That was before he stepped over her legs to crouch down on the other side and pulled the drawer back open. He reached in and brought out the object that she had replaced not too long ago before shutting the drawer and taking a seat on the floor opposite her. "For the record, this is not how I planned it."

He fiddled with the box in his hand before opening it and turning it towards her. Once everything had caught up to her, Kono said the first thing that came to her. "Oh, my God," she whispered, suddenly sitting up straight. Yeah, she was still a girly girl at heart.

A small smile played on his lips at her exclamation. "So, um, Kono; will you marry me?"

Although she had been expecting it, doubt still managed to settle at the back of her mind. "Are you sure?" she asked, just to make sure.

"Am I-? Yeah, I'm sure." Steve assured her, faltering slightly at her questioning.

Kono grinned slowly, biting her lower lip to keep it in check. "Then, yes, I would love to."

LOVED it! The way you write the easy, back and forth banter between the team mates and S&K is spot on! I may sound a bit greedy writing this but I would love it if you felt inclined to write more about these two ;)

Love this fic !

Sent from my iPod touch via Pocket Fiction

First of all, loved it! The characterizations were on point. Didn't miss any of the auxiliary characters, although, I do love Chin. And second, Alex O'Loughlin, yes please.

absolutely wonderful. just fabulous. beyond sweet.

Yuppie. I liked it.