Reviews for Cold Competition
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17
I have already read this story two to three times but it is still amazing and mind blowing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2017
It is nice
Daniela chapter 10 . 3/27/2014
The plot is really interesting but I had to stop reading for the amount of OOCness especially Kai :( It would have been interesting if Hilary went with Tyson and make a TyxHilxKai if you wanted pairing, making her choose between one of them in late chapters. That way Kai don't look ooc too much and giving you the oportunity to play more with the relationship of the Blitz. Boy as a family. Other than that the story is well writting, amazing plot and abundant chaps one of the best
BadmanTing chapter 30 . 12/2/2013
Amazing story and a great read! Got me hooked and the plot was excellent. The fact that there are 2 of you astounds me!
Well done :)
Guen Haoru chapter 30 . 3/28/2013
Wow...It's...just...great! I love it, I love it, I love it! Thank you so much!
Storybookwriter chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
*Claps loudly*
I love this!
You're really good!
mahwish1 chapter 30 . 9/22/2012
I don't you know if you still read your reviews, but I want to thank you and tell you how beautiful this story is. You two sure put a lot of effort in this, which is so awesome.. :) I simply loved everything about this story.

This is going to be one of my favourite stories, that's for sure. :)

I'm really looking forward for the sequel. :) I'm actually going to read in now, as I cannot wait any more. :)
gizmo5225 chapter 25 . 7/27/2012
Long chapter now. Packed with interesting details. Kai's flashback about his mom was a bit painful, just knowing and reading a child seeing his own mother murdered before him. It flowed well into the next part, and that was well written. I liked how Ray and Kai also snuck up on their team, it shows just how close they are compared to the rest of their team. Had to laugh at that. I liked how Tala and Bryan seemed a bit surprised at the tournament being in Russia. The snow ball fight was so one sided I had to laugh, and the lesson is 'Never challenge someone who grew up in snow to a snowball fight.' I know that myself. The machine is back, a smaller portable version! I wonder why the other White Tigers weren't affected though... But still an amazing chapter all the same!
Thanks thus far for putting up with me, since this is i believe my last review. I'll check though. You two write amazing things so long as you keep writing I'll keep reading!
gizmo5225 chapter 24 . 7/26/2012
In Hal's face! That was a smart move on Kai's part, save when he nearly fell over afterwards. He's not taking care of himself again... Funny how it's always just this steady stream of things one after another and e finally drops and that's when everything stops and dies down. Thedon attack was scary, it was suspenseful and filled with action. The description of Kai was amazing, the second voice idea was fitting and overall he was amazing in that scene. The cloaked figure was Fabian, right? A member of the demon council. Sorry if his name was wrong, I don't remember that part very well. But the part with Kai falling ill was unexpected, I loved that part and it's a good way to keep me reading. Almost finished with my unreviewed chapters.
gizmo5225 chapter 23 . 7/26/2012
Where do you get the riddles for Tao? A one legged duck... That was priceless. Ideas for training were amazing to read, I understand where Tao got the sea. He's insane, button a good way really. And Hal... It almost sounds like Kai's past, in the sense he was left. I hate people who want to be friends or something like that, take someone away, just because they became famous. I remember what happens though... Nice little cliffhanger almost, I loved it!
gizmo5225 chapter 22 . 7/26/2012
I'm a bit surprised Kai reacted the way he did. His self control really went out the window. Harsh comment... I understand why Zeo stick around after that, rain is no fun and it'd be worse for him. I can imagine them dripping puddles on the floor with how long they were in the rain. Kai never did really follow old sayings, besides maybe curiosity killed the cat when Ray nearly gets himself killed. The view sounds amazing, id like to see Chinas back country now myself to see if it is like that. Amazing chapter, and Kai and Ray's pasts were a welcome touch. Loved it and will keep going!
gizmo5225 chapter 21 . 7/26/2012
Finally Mariah is friendly to the new girl named Kathleen! It's probably nice for Kathleen since like Mariah she was the only girl on her team. Personally I'm glad she switched, she's a good character at heart. Then Zeo appeared. I'm not exactly surprised Kai was that mad at Zeo; it was definitely a point that Kai hates Zeo with passion. But with Wyatt's blade, it made Kai's hatred grow I think. I like the nickname 'pest' from Kai. I laughed at the movie with Kenny being totally distracted by data and ignoring the movie, I wa waiting for someone to scare him outbid his wits there. Amazing chapter, a bit shorter than previous ones but all te same great.
gizmo5225 chapter 20 . 7/26/2012
I was a bit shocked Hilary didn't freak out more than she did. But a good start, and Max saved the day! Or night, as it would seem. I wonder if Ray noticed the change in Kai before then. And it's almost funny how easy it is for the White Tigers to figure out It was the Panthers. Then Kai is Kai and goes off, telling only Ray where he's goin an even then only a very vague idea. And obviously Bryan knows Kai well, what with tracking him. If Kai doesn't want to be found, he is near impossible to find. And the White Tigers figured everything out with the Phoenix and all that. I love how that works out. And the Phoenix is a full- blood demon despite being previously a human, correct? I always want to be sure I have thing straight. Interesting chapter, and I'll keep reading.
gizmo5225 chapter 19 . 7/25/2012
Epic battle! And I've herd of that tactic, of letting your enemies kill each other than going in to finish off whoever came out alive. The Panthers were smart in that move until Kai got pissed at them. Kathleen say the happiness and switched sides, Kai finally got te message of 'Touch Ray and I will burn you to a crisp' across to them, and then there's the group heading to the park. Amazing chapter, I loved it all!
gizmo5225 chapter 18 . 7/25/2012
I only reviewed like half of the last chapter, sorry! But that machine was amazing. I don't know why, but when it was described Miguel's bit beast came to mind since it was a gargoyle like creature. The stuff before with Tala trying to kill Tyson was hilarious, and I wasn't surprised when I read Ray would always beat Tyson at Twister. The whole thing was amazing. And I had to laugh at a concussed Kai... He's so different like that. An interesting chapter overall, I liked it.
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