This story is great and not to mention funny. LOL.

man i'm glad I'm jewish

Ok, so that was far less complicated, if a far more entertaining version of the one I wrote. I tip my hat to you. I am curious, did you right this after or before you let me write my version of this?

If only this was actually true... :')

Hehehe. Poor girl :) That was a fun chapter.

Simple, warm and cute - I like it.

it was really cute, great job merry christmas

So sweet so cute. :)

nice, a simple, relistic, and funny story, just what the holiday spirit needs, well done

Aha, this was a lovely little one-shot. Simple idea executed very well! Keep up the good work!

Also, it's nice to see a fellow Brit writing some great stuff :)

Dawn is so adorable! Very cute and just in time for the holidays!

Very cute! Great writing style and very short, but sweet.