Ooooh, I cant wait until they get older! They'll be like: "Hey, remember when we thought the house was haunted and then we...hold on...OH MY GOD! *troll face*

This had me giggling so hard. Iza-mama? Shi-dada? That's just adorable.

LOL this is hilarious!

Poor shizu-chan and izaya XD

Great fanfic! Those kids are soo adorably cute but my god are they so annoying because of interruptions... it was funny when izaya got mad and panicked with pull out pull out dammit! And the kids questioning why shizuo's hand was covering his 'peepee' lol

Great lemon btw you write it amazingly and I strrongly recommend you to update this to a threeshot..I mean I really wanna know the whole hotel business not to be pervy~ p please and thank you! And if you do write a third chapter, I wish you luck in finishing it fast without 'interruptions'.

..My attempt at humor... ._.

Awww :3 It was an absolutely amazing story! But poor Izaya and Shizuo! And poor kids too, it had to be really frightening for them. Oh, actually parents should be happy, because they have creative and really brave children - they wanted to fight with boogieman! And this Uncle Shinra and Auntie Celty moment was very cute too :3. And as someone said *coughthree-shotwillbewonderfulbecauseyou'regreatatwritinglemonscough* /shot

So good story!but i really wonder how Delic and Hibiya would they had reacted,if they were here too?Anyway the story was really good, i like the lemon though they did fail to go alll the way(_).And keep writing so youll improve your skills.

Bahahah, that was amazing! I love how Izaya and Shizuo are a couple with kids without me having to read the whole Mpreg thing or whatever... Just how it all seemed normal, I really love it! It was so cute XD

Hahah, too bad they kept getting interrupted... I'd love to know what happened in the hotel.

*coughthreeshotpleasecough*

-shotdead-

Keep up the good work! X'D

This was great~! XDDD Lol I feel so bad for the kids though. XDDDD

I feel so bad for poor Izzy and Shizu-chan. XD

Really good story! Those kids are such troublemakers!

And don't worry, your lemony moments were of no fail.

So adorable~!

Great job. u

I can't wait for the next one. XDDD The kids are so cute~! But then again they did come from Izaya and Shizuo~!

Ooohhmygoodd!~ this was one of the greatest I have read! The children are absofuckingdorable! And I loove how their daily life is and how much they love and want each other and this is just a perfect outcome of how their future could become! XD I love this fanfiction soo much that I am utterly suprised it only has 2 and not a thousand xp I mean your writing is pretty fucking good and I love the situations lol poor shizaya tryin to get it on~ I really hope you update as soon as possible and I just want to thank you a million thousand infinity hundred times for making such a good LONG! Chapter! xD I really do hope they get to do it in the next chapter! And I love the slutty vulgar mouthed izaya xD he's just soo caring and so is shizuo~ I love them and you soo much! Thank you again for writing this chapter! I hope you are able to update fast without pressure or getting sick! I REALLY LOOK FOWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! ) thank you so much! Lots of love and luck!

Omg. Those kids are THE CUTEST EVER.

Can't wait for the rest~