I really liked the message behind that last chapter. This was a good read.

i really loved ur story dude. congrats c:

Prediction: Karen is Ike's secret girlfriend.

Gaaaahhhh, this ia the second story of yours that I've read, and I love them to death! But the endings... THERE IS NO CLOSURE!I have to keep reading your stuff to see if there's sequels or something! I just...I can't... I love them so much! And they just end! And I die a little inside but they're sooooo gooooooood.

Seriously dude, I don't mean to be mean or anything, but you use the phrase "roll eyes" too much and I'm beginning to hate reading it in literature.

awesome history :D you are speak spanish?

Aww cute! :3

I love this story, and that ending was absolutely perfect. Thank you! :)

One thing I'm going to remember about this story (besides how much I'm enjoying it) is last night I had this 'thing' I had to do that required my attention for about ten minutes every hour or so, and rather than trying to sleep in between I was reading this. So, thanks for helping me stay awake :)

I love your stories, and this one is one of my favorites so far. I love everything about this, the characters (Butters and Kenny are perfect), the plot...Butters' parents walking in on them, LOL. Thank you for this, and I'm eager to see what happens next.

Fucking A. Love it 3 Definite fav. I love stories that have their own storyline, good OCs and a beautifully written plot. Then again, I've read most of your work and it's all super fantastic!

great summarization. :) We all get two kinds of 'family', the one we're born into and is recorded and documented as we live and grow, and the one we build with the relationships we develope with those around us. Sometimes your dad really is the person you've set in your mind as your 'dad' figure, and sometimes it's someone else in your life whose been there for you like a dad should. This story is a great example of that. I love that you didn't cut Bebe out, but made it clear that she doesn't want to be the 'mom' person, she'd rather be more like the cool aunt :). Altogether, a very nice story !

This is so deep... lmaoo! I like it though...

Jesus this story was way too amazing. I have to say that even though Kenny, Butters, and Patrick were the main characters and I simply ADORED them, my favorite character in this was Kyle. The way you wrote him just hit his personality dead on. A slightly robotic asshole who also cares in a really obscure way. I could write an essay on the whole story nut it's 4am and I'm tired.

oHmy..i'm crying..great conclusion. At first when I saw how short that the last chapter was I was bummed out, but then the conclusion...and patric...he cant die! He's Mysterion jr? hahah ok thanks for being awesome and hooking me onto bunny!

ok, im officially crying now!