Reviews for Halo (PARTIALLY BEING REWRITTEN) |
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Guest chapter 4 . 12/17/2019 Loved it update please |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/17/2019 Love this I was pissed she died early in the show |
CrazyCowLady2 chapter 4 . 10/22/2019 I never really thought of an Amy/Daryl pairing but I'm liking your story so far! Hope you continue! |
Gracie Miserables chapter 4 . 10/20/2019 I agree with you. There are not many Amy and Daryl stories. I thought Amy really was going to kill herself before Daryl stopped her. She deserved better in both the comics and the show. Awesome job. |
H chapter 15 . 7/26/2019 Love this story, you should definitely keep going. |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2016 This is really good and I like the idea of Amy surviving and getting together with Daryl. Only thing is, Daryl is t twenty-four and Amy isn't a teenager. Not sure exactly how old Daryl is supposed to be, but ihe's gotta be at least in his thirties. And *shudder* at the multiple, multiple mentions of Amy as "the teenager." It makes it seem dirty. Plus, Amy isn't a teenager. The Wikipedia page says she's twenty-four. Not sure whether that accounts for the fact that it was her birthday when she died or not, but either way she is an adult, so any relationship she and Daryl got into wouldn't be statutory and wrong. She's a grown woman, albeit young. Sorry, this isn't meant to be a flame at your story in any way. I think it's really interesting because I've never come across a Daryl/Amy story and I've only come across a few stories where Amy lives at all...I just get majorly quicker out every time I read the line "the teenager." Personally, I think you should revise that if you're revising chapters. I think a lot of the reviews against this ship are because you've made her so young...yes, that may be bypocritical because I'm sure at least some of hem are Bethyl shippers, but (in my opinion anyway) the reason people don't have the ick factor abou Beth and Daryl is because the actress who portrayed her was in her late twenties (I think 29?) so it didn't seem gross. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2016 Amy death is so sad |
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 17 . 1/22/2016 Great chapter. So glad Amy put Glenn in his place. |
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 16 . 11/29/2014 Glenn should die. I don't like how he's acting towards Amy and Daryl. Please kill him. |
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 15 . 6/5/2014 Glenn is an asshole |
cemmia chapter 14 . 2/16/2014 In their world age really isnt what matters most.. Love the story! I hope will continue soon.. |
Beaufale chapter 14 . 1/26/2014 Well I like this story, no matter the age gap. It's written very well |
EmilyAndTheDiamonds chapter 1 . 1/1/2014 Hiya, I think this story it EPIC! Do you know if you're planning on doing anymore chapters to it? |
WWELover1 chapter 14 . 12/3/2013 I agree with JP and D.D, do not put a lemon and D.D's opinion on Amy's age is okay with me :) |
Rose chapter 14 . 10/25/2013 eighteen is not underage, she is an adult. |