sksksjksjsk THIS IS SO AMAZING?

This story is literally what I needed right now, SO FREAKING GOOD! It is written so simply yet with such Detail! It is is Absolutely Perfect! It really shows the art of Fantasies, (Which all of us have ;)) about the people we want to have relations with and the art of fruition of these fantasies (Which I have never sadly have... :( *Sighs*) Well, Thanks for making this wonderful piece of art!

Awww man! I wish there was more! :3 Pleaseee!

what the fuck? who does that?

This is very good! Keep up the good work!

First off it was a pretty good story, David was being adorable, but now I'm all sad cause they can't be together but they have to be!

Well it's been a while since I've read a Newsies fic. Even longer since I've read a really good Javid fic. Javid fics seem hard to come by on this site, which really sucks. Anyway, this was quite a yummy little read. I loved how you wrote the characters, especially David. I don't know if you intend to continue this, but if you do, I'll definitely be back!

Well it's been a while since I've read a Newsies fic. Even longer since I've read a really good Javid fic. Javid fics seem hard to come by on this site, which really sucks. Anyway, this was quite a yummy little read. I loved how you wrote the characters, especially David. I don't know if you intend to continue this, but if you do, I'll definitely be back!

Great stuff. I always pictured Jack and David together. Such chemistry. There needs to be a newsies sequel of some kind where in, they are a couple. Do you think disney would okay it? ;)